The concept is good and the story looks nice; however, it's filled with run-on sentences, grammar problems, and has a few rare spelling errors. The writing quality is what's holding back your work.
I gave it a try since it had some good reviews. Overall a good story but there is too many ocs because its set in the future. That makes it hard for me to care about anything after the highschool arc. I think that if you had set the story in the past it wouldve have been more interesting but thats personnal preference. Overall Great main character and if you like ocs and dont care about being familiar with the players he will play against this story is for you but not for me.
I read this story at least twice a year. It’s not perfect but very satisfying. Give it a try :)
I've loved everything about this book so far but its the same as another book I've been reading when they get the the payed chapters the quality dropped names not capitalised and its not making any sense anymore its such a shame I was really enjoying this book as well, oh well looks like another drop to me
Story great from the start gives minimum background of the world and the character get a great character development as the story progresses. Only draw back is that after some 300 chapters you can't read the novel as it's full of grammatical error as it useless as we can't get the content of the story from that. Other than that it's a good story.
5 star for u now give me more updates
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i love this story soooo much and have been resisting the need to binge the intaier 70chs in one sitting i love the MC he is smart knows cliches and makes use of them (no dense/beta mc), his porsonality is very deep and has layers yet very simpal and we learn of him with the female lead how is one of my fav waifus even thow ther is no image of here
I don’t know if you can see this author but I have read many novels and the impact this one has had on me is on the same level as when I first started reading cultivation novels.
Your Ideas on Dao and True Cultivation are truly novel and amazing. It has expanded my world view on what it means to be a cultivator. I guess this is an example of the saying, the Dao is Infinite.
I hope you continue writing this book someday when you are ready again as I would love to read more on your thoughts about Dao and Cultivation.
5 star paren ina mk author kekekekekekekekkek
it's an amazing book! very recommended to accompany my free time, i'm waiting for your update, keep going author![img=update][img=recommend]
the name of the novel should be change to My system allows me to copy Skills after all talent do not have cooldown should be a passive thing with a system like that the novel would be a lot better without it