I absolutely adore this; it's incredibly touching and genuine, if we overlook the tree spirit aspect (?). It's a delightful short story that stirs your emotions. Give it a read; it'll tug at your heartstrings but leave you with a warm feeling. The translation, storyline, and characters are all exceptional! ?
Your writing is exceptional! It truly captures the essence of the journey towards humanity, self-discovery, and the challenges of fitting into a predominantly heterosexual society when in love with someone who is also straight. The characters felt so relatable, and their story touched my heart. Xing Tong's character was particularly endearing, and the conclusion was both fulfilling and satisfying. This is an outstanding narrative; I wholeheartedly give it a 10 out of 10 and would definitely recommend it.
The translator's work varies greatly in quality, with some passages seemingly clearer in their original Japanese. There's a lack of proper editing, as evidenced by errors like incorrect use of personal pronouns and occasional autocorrect mishaps. For example, "What the f*ck" became "What the French Toast" and "dumb looking" turned into "dumbledore," suggesting inconsistency rather than translation issues.
Initially, the story had potential with moments of charm, but it took a dark turn. The writing became overly edgy and detracted from the immersion, particularly when plot developments felt forced or poorly executed. A supporting character was abruptly removed because she wouldn't approve of the protagonist's actions, which came across as a transparent character manipulation.
In this alternate world, norms seem non-existent, as everyone is portrayed with mental issues. This exaggeration leaves only a few characters seemingly stable, and the protagonist's character arc includes an unexplained secondary personality that eventually resolves without proper explanation. Many aspects of the story feel unresolved or unnecessarily convoluted.
There are numerous issues, but if you've read this far, I won't force you to continue. The manga adaptation might improve things, but for me, the novel was severely undermined. A complete rewrite of the later parts would likely be necessary to salvage the story.
idk how somebody can even start to read this
the name is copycat and the novel must be even worse
Bruh at first when I saw "he" I thought it was just a grammar mistake until I back the homepage and checked the tag that I realized it was yaoi (╥_╥) (╥_╥) (╥_╥) (╥_╥)
Yup, it is completed.
How was it can u tell more of the story?
Can someone help me, I don't remember if I have read this or not, there was scene maybe in this novel? where the MC sits on a mountain top and gets a buddha palm skill or something through his pickup system. I am desperately trying to find a good novel, if you can confirm that this scene is in this novel then it will be a great help
where did that come from
Lmao forget updates, the chapters aren’t even there past chapter 8. It’s all blank pages. The only reason chapter 8 contains chapter 8 is because I reported it like a million times over a few months before giving up.
ah nah but I'd those anyway
Da fuq????