Your webnovel is truly fantastic! The plot is engaging, and the characters feel so real. I’ve been hooked from the first chapter! If you have a moment, I’d love for you to check out my work too. I’m just starting out and would really appreciate your feedback. Thanks for sharing your talent
it's not bad, I would say, but it honestly feels like the fantasy of an 8th grader, he's this normal guy until whoa he wakes up with powers and then he goes and wins against his bullies and he just hurts all the people who try and bully him. If that's your cup of tea, go for it. Otherwise, just look away.
Very refreshing take on cultivation and amazing writing quality. His cultivation technique is the first I've seen or heard something like it, which is awesome. I love that he can commune with qi, which gives it a more lifelike quality.
As the author, I think that I deserve a good review :)I mean, I wrote the book, of course I'm gonna think it was great haha. Yk, 5 star material.
the author really cooked ?, love the novel till now
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So far so good. I really liked thr prologue. Just a little improvement in writing quality and all will be good. Overall I like the book!
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my Father yelled like a rock singer from inside the house.
"Ku ku ku, you definitely want to make an interesting villain huh? Ku ku ku." Jester laughing with his typical laugh.
"Holly?"
Some say he is the most beautiful in all the lands.