Honestly really liked it first 30 chapters but the moment it goes away from being just the Mc to the guild is when it becomes sloppy. The difference between the growth rate in power when he was alone and when he is with them is stupid. Another thing author was very focused on levels and details of the Mc but what happened after that nothing no show cased in level growth, 10*Exp potions never mentioned or used, which could easily give him a lead, another problem is he is a regress or but his knowledge doesn't seem oh so great.And lastly I feel that it was too rushed to introduce side characters as not alot of time was given to the Mc for us to develop a connection with so now if the Mc dies I wouldn't even care and could continue reading the story
And so, today marks the day of the 1st year anniversary of [Re: DTS]. Thus, I've finally decided to review my book and give some insights on whether or not you should pick it up or not (I've rated it 3.0, as it's the middle ground.)
Now with that in mind, shall we get started? (At the time of this review, 27/7/2021 - 222 Chapters)
-Writing Quality-
I'll start with writing quality. In terms of it, I'm fairly confident to say that it's one of my best qualities of this book and as an author, I can safely say it's one of the good quality books out there. (Yes. I have flaws and me saying this gives quite a bad take on the other stuff since I'm saying 'best' quality, but I'll continue onto this point later.)
Though, despite what I said, you may not think so as my initial chapters (Arc 1 mainly) has some terrible grammar errors which I'm looking to fix in the future. But it does gradually get better as you progress through the story.
-Story Development-
For story development, the pace of the story is quite slow. So if you do not like it, you may not want to read it. However, I tend to write a lot of lore/backstory for my book, which I'm confident in.
But, continuing onto my previous point that I've made in writing quality. In general, I do not have much confidence in the earlier plotlines of the story.
1. I've got too many regrets and had many misoppurtunities for certain scenes.
2. At the time of writing the arc (Arc 1), I was incredibly sick - Thus, the flow was not there.
3. A few flows of the story that may not sit well with many people.
I for one had felt as if the dropping point for a lot of people starts here. And, well, I would too at a certain point. But, despite this, I'm working to improve on what I've built upon. Currently, as of Arc 3 and the recently finished Arc 2, I can say that I very much like the current flow of the story (With some minor issues I've faced some chapters ago). So, for now - While writing Arc 3, I will gradually revamp Arc 1 and the first half of Arc 2. It will be much better than now, that much I can promise.
-Character Design-
To say the least, I'm an author who likes to write dialogue rather than narration. I love to emphasize characters and have them lead everything rather than myself. I love the characters and enjoy every interaction that they have, even if some may be useless. However, it does come with some downsides as many (I presume the main reason) of you would like to only solely read about the MC since he is a support. But, I would also be focusing on the subplots of each and every side character (Mains) that are introduced. I'm a fair person and would give everyone complete stories by the end of the book.
-World Background-
Firstly, the PVP system in this game emphasizes a MOBA format (Yes, there is a classical PVP system like 1v1/or other game modes and etc) But, the main point of focus is the VRMOBA aspect (I will give this and the game equal focus) and I am very much excited to write about the strategies of how a game would play out and the like :3
For the game's core mechanics - I gave it a typical RPG take with my own twist to it (I had issues with cooldown initially, but I've fixed it) - I make sure the mechanics all make sense to one another and that, the game's logic is logic.
For this book, I have taken inspiration from multiple places. Games mechanic, novels like TKA or Overgeared, animes like Log Horizon and manhwa.
Now that concludes the end of the review. You can ask me questions down in the replies and I'll do my best to answer them (Without spoilers of course), but that is mostly it. Thank you so much for reading, have a great day!
I know this is a red flag for many of you reading this. But, who am I to say for you to read it or not? This is my take on it personally after a year of writing this book. However, I love the characters, the world of this book that I've written. So, my final words: You may like it. So pick it up if you'd like and thank you :3
Enough to get my attention. The story is good too. The main character of this novel is very good, and hopefully he can return to being a professional player.
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im not sure how to evaluate this novel considering how bad it is, the novel has everything from 'how to write bad novels that will only appeal to x demographic' starter pack
i hope this will get picked already read the 20 chapter and it's good for me . . .
I'm really enjoying it so far (on chapter 8) and I hope to read more. The characters seem fun and have a good development and so far not many things to pick out that ruins it.
The writing style and writing quality are superb! I am engrossed with just reading the whole thing. I must say this is one of the gems hidden especially for sci-fi lovers. Grammar and sentence structure was their best. You won't have any problem stuttering at all. All in all, quality is its finest. Also, the pacing and word choice is lit! Good job!
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First of all, I was pleasantly surprised by the grammar. There was barely any mistakes, and the diction was advanced and allows readers to visualize the world easily. It reminds me of classic DnD fantasy with modern touches. I'm looking forward to the story, keep it up!
not that good especially towards the end he becomes completely hateful and romance is thrash
I’ve only just began this book up to ch 37. The world building is very interesting 5/5 and the first chapters are great but the more you read the worst it gets everything seems very forced and the author doent know when to stop the internal monilog and explain the subject form a 3rd person pov. The parents starts off has being very bad parents and neglecting the mc but it seems the author suddenly changes his mind. I do think this story has potential if the author starts fixing his mistakes and stop making everything sounding so forced. Not worth coins but I do think you should read this on a free website.