So far, a promising read. The plot is intriguing, as well as concept. Text is understandable, but I would find myself rereading to get the gist. I suggest changing some sentence structure would do the trick. The narration could use some proofreading, since some transitions are rough.Overall, an interesting read. Keep up the good work.
I really like my own story, please review it yourself!
This book RUINED me (in the best way possible). It’s terrifying and beautiful at the same time?? Like I laughed, cried, and screamed all in one chapter. Every chapter makes your heart beat faster and the writing makes you feel like you're THERE. Totally worth reading, 1000/10
readers don't let it pass you , believe me you will miss it
Never! Never!
Humans can surpass his
Leader of Ridicoulus Human I.
"Oh well then my Lord, should I prepare the tools and ingredients for the creation?" Lilith asked.
PaGo" I don't like that kind of things where you get new ability and forget the old ones in the future. You see I like to have few powers and be OP character while using that power."
Kita berduapun bergegas mengambil tas dan bersiap-siap untuk pulang, ada diantara pegawai yang memakai kendaraan sendiri ada juga yang dijemput suami atau anak mereka Mak Rat, Mak om, bg ewin, bg jep kita pulang duluan ya"
AND
"Hei" teriak Zi Lei pada wanita itu, Ye Mu Xi. Ye Mu Xi sadar merasa ada yang memanggil nya dia pun merunduk melahap makanan nya fokus.