I'm glad you're posting chapters again, don't let yourself be shaken, and don't try too hard, if you can keep 1 chapter daily, we as readers will be happy.By the way...? I am the ghost of the millennium. I came here to mark my presence. If you are lucky enough to see my review, smile, you will have 2 lucky minutes~ ?
Yes there are mechanical/grammar errors. There are always errors in every story. Don't let them distract you from the genuinely entertaining tale.I hope you like details! Because DETAILS ABOUND. How many chapters are dedicated to the character creation menu? MORE THAN YOU'D THINK. But I still found it interesting, in a munchkin way. It's human nature to maximize.I want more, and am eagerly awaiting the next updates.
I wanted to write a fun, cultivation world novel while using the usual cliches and tropes of the genre in my own way. This is not your typical cultivation novel, and I hope you enjoy this.This novel is based on the fun adventures of a reborn disciple from Earth and Immortal Master who lacks social skills.Planning to update 1/day. I want to write slightly long chapters and hence it's hard for multiple releases. I am thinking of breaking down long chapters to 2 for the first week.I know I am not great at writing, and I forget even the basic grammar rules. But I really want to tell stories.So if you find errors or have suggestions, please feel free to comment.This is my entry for WPC #108.I do realize the works that I am a horrible editor of my own work. So, if I end up missing anything, I will try to go back and edit those past chapters after a certain number of chapters get released.Looking forward to building this novel with you all and learning from it.Still why I give this a 5* rating? Because I am shameless and this is my own novel xd.
Errors all over the place and even a Name change at Chapter 20
Love the book I thought at first it will be like every space novel and be cliché by thankfully it is not so I am happy nice storyline by the way
looks interesting i guess ? zzz
Oh my GAH! I found a Gem! Love the premise, can't wait to see how the writer handles it. Hopefully something more than just lemon lemon stuff happens, cuz is love to see that
Im disappointed that this is dropped already, it was really fun to read. But oh well its dropped now. And it's a really rare and hard to find genre of novel so I was excited of this one but oh well, just goodluck to your other or upcoming book.
The story is (as the author frequently mentions) quite the cliche. However, I don't really mind that. An author doesn't have to reinvent the wheel to write an amazing story. Fuethermore, the "second-chance VRMMORPG" genre is one of my absolute favourites. With that said, I would like to start my review.The initial summary and the positive reviews made me incredibly excited. A gunslinger in a fantasy world? How fun and imaginative! Even though it's not 100% original, I don't mind it at all! The author might seem slightly too protective of his story and (honestly?) a bit scared of constructive critism, but, once again, I don't mind. However, even after 20 chapters, the novel still doesn't seem like a VR story. Quite frankly it's like the author cant bring himself/herself to decide whether to write a LitRPG or a "transported to a different world" novel. Even characters (NPCs) that are utterly pointless (and are literally AIs) are introduced with a whole lifestory attached to them. Why? What does this information contribute to the story? It is a game. Not a real world. However, honestly I wouldn't have minded this so-called 'game' if it wasnt for the excessive swearing. The protagonist is a 34 year old pro VR gamer yet even after reincarnating he acts and talks as if he is a child. How he (supposedly) controlled a guild with 5,000,000 players in it is utterly beyond me. I know it can be difficult to write in informal language. But just adding cursewords into sentences doesn't solve it.Oh yeah, and he is called "manco" (japanese for vagina). The former void assassin, super player, reincarnated guildmaster literally adopts the name pu**y in his quest for vengence...So yeah. In conclusion: I dropped it.
Extremely derivative work with obvious influences from WoW and other MMOs. There is very little originality to this work. Maybe the author will come up with some twists but so far this is just the typical OP MC in a game world story.
The translation is so bad that its hard to understand what is going on. Even though the story is good so far, but the bad translation just kills it off for me, probably coz it really does kill my brain cells.
I use to love this novel but the new updated version completely destroyed it... Author fix this bull**** please. .......................................................