"I'll tell i'll tell!" Don and June smiled as they sheathed their weapons and looked at Con expectantly.
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Like everything up until that yuri, yup, nope, I’m out. Great story author but I ain’t coming back. Other than that and it needing some more world development, I think it’s fine, I just can’t. Especially between his sister and best friend, that’s like 1000x worse for me
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I liked the cover so i said lets give this a try. Was i wrong for doing that:no i enjoy the novel:yes.Its an interesting concept of system base novel, but i also feel that the mc wants to grow further and be independent of it. To bad there arent more chapters yet.
Honestly this is one of the better original novels I’ve read on this app and I’ve read quite a bit. I think my most favorite part of this novel would be the facts that you learn from this novel as most of them are pretty accurate however the power system might change as I’m only on chapter 34. Overall the release rate is pretty good considering the content and story building. You can tell the author actually thinks and research’s stuff before he writes it down (he takes his time). Story building is great, but it can be improved slightly if he lets his readers gives some ideas to help improve it as a 2nd opinion would be great. 5/5 great novel.
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A solid 2. Great idea. But when you introduced the arena before even began to develop the life merchant story made me sigh. So much waste opportunities of a good story.So many loops holes. A will name a few that bother it me:-> The contract only specify that if he tell someone about him the contract became null. So what happens in that case ? The money magically returns to him and he keeps the gained life years ? The other party forgets about him ? Either case this magical ability will be very alluring to the underground world. If someone force to say who gave them money. You can imagine the consequences.-> Even in a offshore account he can't spend money in his home. He needs to launder money to appeared to be a legitimate gains. If not the government will be suspicious.-> What happens if someone ask for something that he can't do? What happens if he can't fulfill his part of the deal ? No alternatives explored.-> Range of the merchant world ? Somewhat we can deduce that is less than 100 meters while he follows the girls back her home.-> Body-fucking-change-pill and he offered that pill to a girl in a toxic relationship. Not even thinking about trans ? Fame wannabes girls/boys? This people will literally die for that opportunities. Even add a clause that if they reach fame they will deposit a certain percentage of money each month.-> You changed the requisite of omnipotent sight from lvl 2 to 3 from 10.000 to 1.000.000 and somehow the mc completed that in less than a month ? Bs.Sorry. Dropped the novel. Maybe even will write a similar but logical story since I like the premise.
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Overall, this is great beginning. Can't wait to know him more. Even if I am not in the romance genre, I can't hate it when the author describe the girl as a good one. If one was in military thingy, this can hook them up. The chapters were just a little short of words.
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Hey author!!Really glad to read your story and shocked that a young author come up with such a brillant idea of writing and expressing thoughts to words...i just read your chapter and each one gave me eager to read another one...every character you just plotted in this story just polished your thinking and writing skills to another level..Really glad that young authors like you growing very well ..Just liked your character samuel the way you just plotted him as a naughty one you made such a entertaining character.. even with the harry just give the vibe of seriousness...But overall all the very best for your upcoming chapters...You are really such a good entertainer