GojoVir
This is amazing ...️
Amazing! Can't wait fir the author to release more books! :)
Not to bad
A light funny story
If you have to tie up loose ends after the epiloge, you didn't write it well enough. Don't even get me started on sentence flow or editing.
The concept was good. The execution lacked big time. Not a well written Werewolf story. Sorry.
Love it! I hope you like all the exciting things in store for you!
Nice story, but a bit disappointed by the end which is wrapped up very rapidly
Thank you readers for reading this book. If you want spoilers for this story then please reply on this comment. I am not getting enough time to write but I will try to write more chapters and will try to post more updates for this book post Christmas if I have enough chapters in my kitty.
The main characters are both intriguing, with good, gradual character development. Antagonists aren’t stupid people who just throw out insults; the world isn’t necessarily peaceful, but it’s not entirely awful either. Not all nobles are evil, which is a refreshing change from the stereotypes often found in reincarnation novels. The main character isn’t some beta pervert or anything, but he acts his age. He’s not stupid, but he’s not a genius either. There are filler chapters, but they manage to keep the reader engaged and don’t stray too far from the action or adventure. Despite being an adventure story, side characters are reintroduced later, which is nice to see that they’re not just discarded after the main character and Fran leave a particular city. The story isn’t dark and evil, nor is it a perfect world where everyone is nice. It strikes a solid balance, where the main character is okay with killing but doesn’t overdo it, and the same can be said for most other characters. Important side characters have their own goals and POV chapters, and it’s great to see that the main character isn’t the only one progressing; the world is also moving forward alongside them, even though only a few months have passed in the story so far. There’s no insane power leveling, but the main character isn’t helpless either. Fran and the main character don’t force any plot armor where they gamble against something much stronger than them (mostly). It’s definitely a story I recommend.
"Fluffy light novel! It was captivating, but the ending felt rushed. The pace was a bit too brisk, and I wish the story could have delved deeper or provided more closure for the other supporting male characters. <3"
It's still early stages, but I've been enjoying the narrative thus far. The story essentially embodies a classic author's power fantasy, where their work has a tangible effect on society. While the impact might be somewhat exaggerated, it remains plausible. The pacing is a tad quicker than what I personally prefer, but I suppose my taste leans more towards a slower pace compared to many readers. It's a unique concept, although it falls under the isekai genre. In this case, the protagonist's youthful age is used to conveniently explain their acquisition of advanced skills, making it less of a focus.
Muitooooo bom amei ?
