Nice book, Jin–main character– is a try hard, he should relax a little. overall all a great book but the pacing is to fast, recommend
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This book is great,I can't wait for Chapter 3
I like how, you write your plot. I like your characters. And I am in love with your writing style. I think I need to read more about your work. I love everything about this book.
Over-all I gave it average better than some not best of its genre can do better peace out
I really enjoying this story and hoping more updates keep coming
You can see that author wanted to project their feelings and thoughts. I think that it is definitely relatable. It gave me a calming feeling of some sort. You can vent and feel understood. Overall; it's quite nice :3
So far love the story, especially the detailed fight scene
(I have read up to chapter 12, which is currently the newest chapter.)Honestly I cant find anything to critique here, gramar is very good, with rare mistakes which are usualy very minor, characters are pretty good, with an interesting dinamic between the various OG protagonists.Overall, this is definitely in my raidar now, I suggest you give this novel a try!
Çok güzel bir hayran kurgusu. Lütfen bırakmayın ve devam edin. Bu yazıyı kütüphaneme ekledim ve yeni bölümleri heyecanla bekliyorum. Başkalarının dediklerine asla aldırmayın. Bu sizin hayran olduğunuz bir serinin kitabını kendi düşünceleriniz yazmanız, zaten bu yüzden hayran kurgu yazılar deniyor. Beceriksiz sadece laf kalabalığı yapabilen toksik insanların sözlerini dinlemeyin ve yazınızı devam ettirin. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I like it where can i continue to read it?? ??
Hello everyone, I'm the author of this novel, and I hope you enjoy it. I have more stories that I've written, and I hope you'll like them as well. Thank you for your feedback, and please continue supporting my novels. Thank you!