I had expected something good after author's last novel 'stealing heroine' one but this novel was a dissapointment i won't say anything about bad grammar but novel was full of lines trying to evoke a comedic atmosphere though it wasn't able to do it. and there are other things but i ain't gonna type anymore
Writing : Overall, the writing is quite good. There are a frequent errors in the sentence structure, but they don't heavily impact the flow of the story. It would be nice to see a larger variety in the verbiage used, but overall it's good.
Story Developement : The story developement is better then a majority of novels on this site. It is slightly faster then a normal book, but not as rapid as other novels. Progression is clear, although he doesn't face many challenges up until chapter 50. He also doesn't try to build up his relationships with people, yet it just works out for him.
Character Design : The character design is average. It isn't too descriptive, but it gives just enough so you can have a general idea of what a character looks like.
Update Stability : No clue.
World Background : World background is less thought out then I'd like. We have no clue how many vampires there are, other species, or even if there are various continents. The weather is always the same, and we have no clue what the castle, town, or his room look like. It's the biggest problem with this book.
Overall, the story concept and writing is great, the pacing is good, but the world background needs major improvement.
Rating : 3.2/5
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The first chapter introduces the main character and her love interest, and there is some foreshadowing. The plot is interesting. The idea and setting of the novel is great.
Honestly, For me, Sci-fi is a whole new genre. But Definitely, this book got me hooked on it. I havent gone much far but I loved the book already. Good work Author.
That synopsis has me interested in the story... Good luck, hope the brain juice flows well for you unlicke how it does for me
Really great novel! I can't wait for it to get picked back, which I hope the author does. Just finished reading it all and loved the direction it was going. I don't want to accidentally put in a spoiler, so I'll leave it at that for this review. I will say that when it does pick back, it seems due for some world building, perhaps alongside the tournament arc competition thing it's entering.
I just finished reading this book and it is awesome. I hope u come back. I really like the hole plot and everything.. there are a couple things I would change but but its awesome for the most part. If you wont come back to write can you message me I really would like to continue it.. if u dont message me I might just take it anyways and go from where it stopped because it deserves to be finished
Hello electro, I’v been looking for ways to read one of your other series, Monsters and Mys teries, I was on the series final e but it was suddenly erased and I could never finish it. If there’s any way I could get the last book please let me know.
The story starts of good.But one of the characters is spoiled as hell.No sense of anything.Dumb as hell.Story does not even begin properly.Same old BS every bloody time.Pls do your self a favour and dont read it.Worst story i have read in a while
The story is good but it's stuck at chapter 60 and not continuing. The plot of the story is excellent but it seems like it won't continue afterwards.