Bruh all that for fried Chicken I approve and hopIng for a 2nd Book!!!!!!!!'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
enjoying the novel so far hope the author doesn't drop it.nice work btw
[Updated Author Review]
The novel had ended-
what can you expect?
-Opening (Meme)
-Poor Grammar (It's enjoyable only if you can handle it.)
-Word Choice (Maybe...)
-Characters (Meh...)
-World (Meh...)
-Ending (Rush...)
Why 4 stars then?
-Self Encouragement
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I really loved the movie Ready player one but I never got the chance to read the book it was based on, but hey at least i get to read this one.
This is really well written, you get the sense of the world from the words used and I really love your depiction of the Oasis. Its still early days at 7 chapters but so far they are really good. I'll be looking forward to more, good job author
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the synopsis was pretty captivating and for those who love fantasy would have been a massive draw. the author is a good writer and knows how to flow well with words but reading the first few chapters I didn't exactly find what I was expecting...still trying to figure out how the first few chapters connect though(will probably find that out in the later chapters).
the grammar was spot on and the author no doubt is a skilled writer.
A bit shameless writing a review on my own novel. I do hope you guys do the same and enjoy reading my novel as much as I'm enjoying writing it.
The part with the gods ruinning with the wolves chasing him reminded me of that song wolves by marshMello and Selena Gomez, also i recommend listening to it. its a really good song imo “i been running with wolves to get to you”
It's very rare to find a book that implements philosophical reference, these days. Right after I noticed the title of the first volume, I instantly knew if it was based on a work of René Descartes. He was such a great philosopher indeed.
As the synopsis says, "The crimson thread will begin to roll... casting its shades of gray."
My guess this story would not lead into your typical good guy vs bad guy. No. It would become more complex than that.
"Moral Dilemmas" as the author first mentioned in the 21st chapter, and the more chapters will be brought to us, the more it became blur and obscure. The border between evil and virtue will become vague.
The MC really fit into this belief. A demon girl who is somehow contradicting to her born-nature. An angelic demon, you could say. But the thing is... not that simple. She seemingly has a helpful, kind-hearted manner, not because she is a demon on the outside and an angel on the inside, but because she thinks... simple as that. Then again, all of it are related to René Descartes works. You'd better read this story firsthand to comprehend what I mean. It's really worth it.
As I really love the plot, the written narrative and characters description - from what the characters are doing, body language, behavior, their way of think and et cetera - are perfectly served, especially how the author put his/her own thoughts in some chapters. The grammar however, yet I can understand since the author isn't the native english speaker - so am I - nothing to complain. Despite a few mistakes, the story is still easy to understand.
Then last but not least, the author seems worried about the low upload rate compare to other. Here's my little note for you, the author, "Don't compare yourself with others. There's no comparison between the sun and the moon. They shine when when it's their time."
In conclusion, keep writing at your own pace, do it at a speed that is comfortable for you. I don't mind waiting a week or so for a single chapter because I know it will going to be ripe. A good chapter and a great story take time after all.
The translation is pretty bad but the story is worse. The MC is given an OP skill. Then the author ignores most of what he writes to make the MC even more OP. Their is no point in reading the story because nothing bad can happen to the MC. There is no conflict resolution because their can never be any real conflict. Its boring.
Hiya author, The book is lit. The system adventure is too great to describe well.I love how MC is gonna create a world by his own. The power, struggle and journey aka adventure seems promising.Highly recommended to the new authors and those who love adventure.Free warriors ,go read this book. It is a lit.