A solid football novel, with good development of the mc and realistic pathways of development within the football industry. I am looking forward to where its future goes.
I really enjoy reading about the deeper emotions and relationship developing between the two of them. I can't wait to read more. I look forward to seeing how their relationship grows.
always love seeing new works from you but don't forget the oldies. also don't over work yourself or we will all be very sad
This story is so high quality, I feel a little awkward reading it here for free. This can easily be sold as a book.
It shows a xianxia world where strength is everything and cultivators treat normal people like dirt. It's quite gritty and dark at times, specially at the beggining, but after +100 chapter I think it's more apt to call it 'realistic'. The story and its characters were built with care and a lot of work, and it shows. All in all, highly recommended to any who can stomach it.
I remember leaving a review saying i hate Elisa bc she drags out the story and ruins the mc, Im back to say that Elisa is amazing but still for some reason whenever she was introduced and they finally got out of the dungeon everything feels so pointless? Mark will spend dozens of chapters thinking abt somethimg and get really close to and answer amd them BOOM elisa comes right when he almost has am amswer and he completely forgets everything. Love the story and love Elisa but author please dont drag out something for so many chapters with dumb interuptions, its so cliche. The mc will continue to almost be at the brink of something and it gets me on the edge of my seat (Its been ten chapters of just him brainstorming) them for whatever reason the mc will be like "thinking is too much for me right now" making the previous ten chapters pointless. All i want is progression. There is no need for an arc to consist of a drawn out fight where the same thing is continually repeated and a pointless brainstorm over and over again. it takes a solid 50 chapters for any progress to be seen. but i do.... love the tiny interactions between the three krista mark elisa, its just nice... but 20 chapters straight of these interactions can be a bit.... draining. Anyway love the story it truly is just enchanting. The story development is the ONLY bad thing abt this beautiful journey!!!!
MC seems like he is not the MC. Later on when the story develops, he turns into a huge sissy. The amount of novels i've dropped because of how the MC let people trample over him is insane. This novel is no different; it is a such a shame as the theme was really great as a newgame+ type. If only we had a #SissyMC tag.
I hate the sister :) ———————————————————
I want to see this get animated one day. it's a great fantisy story that has a unique world and characters.
This is a relaxed story but it's not really to my taste. It's pretty much just the typical Japanese isekai MC except there's no harem, and he's not as OP. As another reader said in their review, it's kinda childish. I think it would've been better off if the MC was never an adult in the first place because he can't seem to determine whether he wants to behave like an adult or like a child. Even if he's physically 12, it doesn't make any sense for him to act like that considering he's a grown man on the inside, and also the experiences he's been through. Like he grew up in an abusive home, was married for a period of time, lost his wife in an accident, died a couple years after after being shot. With all these experiences, the personality he portrays doesn't make sense. Also, I don't get why the MC wished to be sent to a place far away from humanity when he isekaied but then the moment he came across humans who were a bit nice to him, he didn't hesitate to become their magical sugar-daddy. That aside, the grammar is really good and I didn't come across any errors that made reading difficult. I just couldn't get into the story. Goodluck with your writing, author.
it's very good and I found it very interesting I love it
AUTHOR THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS STORY! anyone who's considering reading it pls give it a go ? I wish I could erase my memory and read it all again ? need more
Really liked the novel, i hope you keep giving new chapters meow. .