A story that is plucked out of the ordinary. The uniqueness pulls any readers deep into the story. A simple and friendly writing style that won't confuse any readers at the same time can give subtle information. This is one of the great masterpiece. Splendid job author! Keep up the good work!
really great story and love it. The plot is nice and the characters are well planned. Keep up the work. Want more chapters. I am waiting for more.
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I truly can not believe that i have found this gem!!It has everything i love and the story development is fine?(en el tiempo adecuado? Ni muy rápido ni muy lento)
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At first, this novel looks promising. Super powerful beauty maid. These powerful maids seem to be very loyal to their master(this is how the novel tries to portray). Yet, at around chapter 28 or so, when their master was attacked, they just stand by and watch? Their master did not say, "hey don't make a move, I will do it myself" or something like that. They as a powerful combat maids assign to their master, seeing their master taking verbal abuse, seeing their master being attacked by those ants, yet they did nothing. Logic is a bit weird here. I know, the author tries to make MC show his power, but the circumstances are wrong. This kind of situation when ants verbally abuse their master, even try to force their master hands and attack him, yet they did nothing? Are they the master or what, they have to let their master do the dirty work himself? Is the role opposite? Would MC become a maid, and those maids were MC's master? Some logic is a bit wrong here. That is my input after reading chapter 28 or 29(and I will stop here, logic weird can't continue in order to save me from getting frustrated from not seeing or understanding the logic through).
Seems like a decent story. Only read 10 chapsNormal guy runs into a mage and becomes his apprentice. Due to his poor elemental affinity he takes a mysterious potion that makes him a pure water mage. Have to see how it goes.
KRARRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!Author I love your writing style and my boy The Jack even when you added the romance!! The story was amazing I would say even 10* better just a little nervous what will happen when the baby come out I hope the story won’t end to fast..Because I’ m in love with this novel…Tbh I thought it would be totally trash but omg I wassss super wrong!!! Author keep it up man!!! Your work is amazing!!!! Can’ t wait for moreee chapters!!!!!
Pretty great story Author, but please keep Daisuke loyal to Yuko in the end. I feel that their relationship is much more interesting, I don't mind the side female characters, it's just that I don't wanna guess whether or not you have them on the love interest list. Otherwise, I would love to see a sci-fi or Cthulhu-inspired world, where mental and technology-based energy are, that would be awesome.Feel free to ignore everything I said after the first four words.
This is great.
I loved the concept of this novel and thought I would give it a try. Best decision I have made in a while. Great fun with lots of good story developments. I love nugget, I love his armor, and I generally love the idea of the character going through this world. The fight scenes are done well, not too much detail but not so little as to be confusing. The grammar and general English is at a high level which is refreshing. If I have any complaints it is that there isn't really enough meaningful character interaction. There are plenty of interactions between our MC and irrelevant characters but seemingly little in the way of discussions that matter or go anywhere. I would love to see a growing bond between him and nugget as well as enduring bonds with others (be they players or NPCs). That said it is very early and this sort of thing can definitely happen with time.