I'll just delete it and re-publish the chapters
Overall this is a good story, but the auther makes grammar mistakes every so often, the mistakes don't hinder the enjoyment of the story though.
Short but so far full of elements heading towards the end of the world. Will definitely continue reading.
Overall, this one is a bit of a hidden gem. Honestly, the title is what both drew me towards it and also discouraged me a little from reading it. (Plus the cover needs a little work in my opinion.) I think it wants to be a little bit of Game of Thrones, Frozen, and whatever clockwork movie you can think of. My only complaint would be that it is trying to do too much and throws you into the story hot, but other than that, it has a solid mix of action and drama with a pinch of comedy. We're slowly getting immersed in the world and it is looking good so far.
I'll give it to you author, the world background has a steady foundation, and the characters are a bit generic but nonetheless good, but the strongest point I believe comes from the story's plot development which is pretty smooth and yeah, I guess the main character really is unfortunate.thanks for the good read Author, continue because you have my interest, so I wish to see more
Giving the first review, I have a youtube page.a Zazzywritesfiction please follow, once i hit 100 subscribers, I would release a mini video of the book
As someone who reads a lot of books on Webnovel its very hard to find a good book, it is a very good title that will sadly get lost in the algorithm and that is no fault of the author. I enjoyed the book and Kalaur's journey which is a def page turner on its own allowing me to relax and gain images as the author is very good at drawing up illustrations in my head with their wonderful depictions
Five star review of course to this amazing book and Author too. Well delivered and relational characters . The chemistry between the ml and FL is undeniable!
Really good story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"Dad, im home."
"Remember leave and dont come back."
"You will no longer laugh when you, enter the Purify room," said Nurseman while forcing me to stand up.