read it if you love cross dressing and multiple potential leads and a good looking father
pretty good for a quickie, i loved their kid and the dynamics between the main characters
Hi, I'm a huge fan of your work! I recently finished reading your book and was thoroughly impressed. I'd love to offer some suggestions on how to further boost your book's success and reach an even wider audience. Would you be open to hearing my ideas?
Writing quality is good and easily understandable, story development is good and so far the character is looking promising and world background has not been mentioned much yet hope its also good and i suggest everyone whether a kid or elder or young give it a read as its looking good so far if you don't mind it having only 1 chapter
Awesome story, a common man due to their beleive he was not common anymore.??I like the plot of the story and background story is just started, i presume that author not let me down as this novels stakes are high twists and turns are interesting ?. I suggest you all support the author by reading their novel and support him with our feedback. I saw in profile this is first novel written by him. I saw a potential in this novels so I am curious for upcoming chapters.
There are some gender pronoun mess ups, and sometimes author gets their characters mixed up. The issue that caused me to stop is the Mountain pile of crap dumped on the MC within the first months of starting this journey. I was fine with the noble family and then some dangers at the sect in the future. But we have already wiped the nobles and have now dumped 2 World level adversaries on our fresh new MC. He has already had to be saved by his alter all powerful ego once.. One of the big bad villains just beat his master and the family he was with.like ants.. Unfortunately piling this level of adversaries on a new MC ruins the story IMO, it sucks the joy out as MC is always one fart from being destroyed. The other thing is the constant beating a dead horse that he needs to reach grand master root to unlock towers and system is worse than the 4 year old doing "are we there yet?" So sad I was really enjoying this read till this.
This book dives deep into the concept of math and spells, fully utilizing the MC's previous life experiences. The pacing and writing style are engaging and thrilling, keeping the audience hooked as they read on to discover more about the world. Overall, this is a spectacular novel for Isekai lovers!
it is a good novel. I hope you will continue updating it steadily
I just finished reading your book, and I have to say, it’s absolutely fantastic! I truly enjoyed it. I’d love to offer a few tips that might help boost the performance and visibility of your book even more. I believe these could take your work to the next level
Good start, a uniqu story. I'll update again in later chaps.
The greatest novel of all time in leveling system with cultivation category. I'm sure everyone will agree with me to say that. If you look on Chinese websites this novel is on fire. The longest novel in the same category and keeps interesting day-by-day. I've read a thousand novels but this novel is the most interesting. Thanks to the translator a million times because if not for him we avid fans of this novel forever be cliffhangered by the reason that faloo would never released a vip chapter even if it was posted in several years. That is my personal experience on other novels. Mr. Translator you're my idol. It is sad to say I don't have a debit card for donation, what I had here is a bunch of sweet potatoes.
this is a overall very good novel to read