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Okay, you're a legend at FPP. This story is amazing and you gotta keep going. I love the way it's written. It just shows the way you put the work into this, magnifico.
This webnovel is an absolute masterpiece. I've spent thousands of hours reading webnovels, and I am pretty sure there's many on this website who've done the same. This goes out to those avid webnovel readers like me, I guarantee this novel is worth reading.
I am gonna try and break down the novel into it's elements and explain why you should/shouldn't read this.
PROS:
1. Regarding the characters:
Characters are well fleshed out, even side characters. They actually seem like human beings with emotions, goals, interests.
Also, there's no ridiculously dumb 2-dimensional filler characters/villains. Unlike other webnovels you can't read 2-3 lines about a character, and instantly tell whether they're common mob A, a villain whose just gonna be MC's "stepping stone", or some sidekick to unconditionally bend over for MC.
Avid webnovel readers know what I am talking about.
2. Regarding the plot:
The novel is dynamic, and intriguing because it's hard to guess what's gonna happen next, and there's an actual sense of tension for the reader.
It's not one of those novels where the MC starts out against the weak villains and the strong villains only come out of the novel after MC has powered up enough to handle them.
Plot twists in the novel actually make sense and aren't there just because the author thinks it's about time to throw in a plot twist.
As far as I've read it's also great that there's no blatantly obvious plot holes.
3. Regarding the MC:
The main character isn't cliche
MC isn't an extremely talented supreme genius. He doesn't have an unbreakable will to move mountains. He doesn't have an unwavering heart of justice.
MC isn't one of those you've insulted my petty pride so I am gonna murder your entire clan, kill all the women and children, raze the buildings, and kill the dog.
Nor is MC one of those perfect do gooders that's gonna help every side character that's nice to him/he likes. He's not gonna be like "You gave me an apple so I am gonna protect your family from the demon king and turn you into a super powerful fighter capable of destroying mountains."
MC is human. MC is relatable because you can imagine yourself being capable of doing/reacting the same way in those situations. MC is looking out for his own interest and trying to stay alive. He's training to grow stronger to survive, but his growth is reasonable and understandable.
4. Regarding world building:
The world/environment the author depicts makes sense and isn't something unreasonable/unimaginable. In fact it makes more sense than common cultivation novel depictions of the world if cultivators existed.
There's no walls of text describing the ungodly beauty of a garden/lake or how huge a mountain range that's only gonna appear once in the story is. Descriptions and world building are to the point, enough to let the reader learn more about the environment the MC, while not boring the reader.
5. Novel has humour and a bit of fan service in it:
In my personal opinion I also like that the author balances humour and tension throughout the novel.
Plot and tension is good, but the author also includes a bit of "fun" stuff for the reader to enjoy, MC doesn't stay a virgin just because he's a complete wimp.
CONS/CON:
As far as I know most of the people who didn't like/didn't continue reading the novel stopped because of how dark it can be at times.
MC is coldblooded, and it may be off-putting to those used to reading novels where the MC is a champion of justice.
MC here won't hesitate to use any means at his disposal to achieve his goals, ABSOLUTELY ANY, and I say that without the least bit of exaggeration.
You're gonna read many novels about so called evil MCs, but the MC in this story makes many of them pale in comparison.
In Conclusion/TLDR:
If you took the time to read all that/skipped everything and are wondering whether to read it or not, read the first 40 chapters. You're almost certain to get hooked.
Good morning Mr author I hope you are doing. I just wanted to say I love this book so please keep write. Don't mind me I am out of words so. Km km km mm km km kkkkkkkkkkk
I don't understand why people judge so negatively this novel so much. The translation is good, as is the stability of the update. It is a modern world, but what distinguishes it from ours are portals to another world. Various countries around the world resist the invasion of barbarians and evil gods. As you know, someone has to face them. So people who started to practice kung fu gained the power to resist their enemies. Our mc will gain a mysterious system that will put him to the test and help him on his journey to the top of kung fu and to protect what is dear to him.
This is the first cultivation novel i read that is not generic, cliché, and repetitive. I love this novel. Hope the author can continue with it. 
I'd say I enjoy the plot. I'm looking forward to more from the MC. I won't ask you to change anything as I believe you have an ending in mind which drives the story development.
Overall a good read, some wording and sentence structure need working on but good otherwise. the story so far is easy to follow and the characters are relateable. I would recommend giving a read.
Awesome story building and one of the best lemons I have read in a while keep it up and this will get big someday good luck
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Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.