Why is this in here? Why is Qidian taking everything in? Well I don't mind it if Qidian taking everything but I do mind it if the story going to be premium one!
So, TWO is basically your everyday Chinese novel which depicts a lot lot lot of history of Chinese people's from the Yellow Emperor till date. If you don't like a lot of history you can pass this one but I recommend it to try.
Mind you, I’ve only read like the first 16 chapters but I have yet to see or read anything that would or could show me that lu Lu or whatever the MCs name as a great thieve as what the title had us believing .
The Mc is just bad written there is no way about it , later on in the story it might get better I don’t know but what I know is that an Ameture author should never write about rebirth cuz that means that our dear Mc needs to be stronger, smarter and way more maturer than anybody else around him , and those aren’t things you can expect from an author writing their first novel .
I mean this novel is screaming at you the ameturness of the Mc , like it his first time playing the game , yea yea I know he had I different class at the time but that doenst mean he need to act like a moron or a twelve years old who just got into the game , don’t even get me started on that whole contract thing I get that the author wanted to write a strifft and all, but did it have to be so stupid and leaving the contract blank not telling us any thing about it is shouts crazy to me , plus what kind of moron accepts a contract that unfair .
There is a lot more , waaaaay more but billige it or not I don’t won’t to get into the details .
just like you said I checked out your novel and I have to say it is interesting. I will sure read it. as for the ratings I will change them in the future. but this novel is not showing in your profile.
rather new approach for a cultivation novel with a good pace.it is different from cultivation novels, where MC gets to the level of sect master in the span of 1 or 2 years with the help of plot armor.
Read about twenty chapters, and feel like dropping it cause of the translation. it just doesn't make sense to me sometimes and if I can't understand what the author is trying to say then what's the point of reading.
Outstanding indeed, this get rid of my boredom, upgrade upgrade upgrade, honestly if I were to have a system like that I would upgrade a brick to the limit and transcended it into a godly artifact and beat up those cliche young master with...
For updates stability Heavens Clan gets a five
I like this story a lot. You have great skills man. I hope you become successful and entertain us with many more stories.
There are few mistakes here and there. If you can avoid them you will be nothing less of a professional. All the best.
Very interesting character being quite himself. Wonderful story. I like the way MC adopts his transmigration from 27 years to 13 years boy.
Does he becomes the owner of the silver ring?What power is hidden in it? ... it's making me curious. Great work!!
Well written, and the system is more complex and interesting than general system out there. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED
Although its less gore than another apocalypse/surviving theme, still enjoyable ^^b
and you get free aphrodisiac poison in your MC body HOHOHOHOHO
am in love withe novel and the synopsis is just great. I hope you could post more.
The theme is somewhat different but it still applies to the same genre and am loving the change of pace and the character of the protagonist.
I hope there is no harem cos it would spoil the pace.
Nice work, keep up the hard work. The story has made my day just that its still in the beginning. I want more!!
While the plot is nice and all, you could do better with your story telling. A whole lot better.