Yi Long sighed, he was careless this time: "I'm losing my grip... if it were the old me, it would've definitely ended long ago..."
Interesting. I 'm curious though, regarding the book into which Yun Xi is transmigrated, is it a book she wrote, which would explain, her having an intimate knowledge of the entire book, cover to cover as it were. Or is it a book she read, one which she thoroughly enjoyed henced she would be familiar with the entire story? I take it sister mentality would that the lead male character views were dictated by his sister's opinion, is that right? I love the unique plot you of transmigrating into a book, good concept. You create a background leading to the transmigration giving it a touch of reality. I take it from observation that tales of transmigration form the background of Chinese folk lore. Anyway you have a great story, with a beautiful buildup. Keep writing author. I 'm hooting for you. Great job?.
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reviewing for the event fp. keep up the good work.
Hmm this novel is unique, because you either love it or hate it, after reading like 90 chapters I can with confidence say that it makes no sense.Hear me out, the story idea is honestly pretty good, but the writing is very erratic that has no real string to tie things together, couple that with mediocre grammar, it’s not unreadable it’s just confusingI feel like it takes something plays with it for a bit and then forget or scrap it completely, the constant jumps between timelines are a fine idea but it’s almost every chapter, sometimes to some random characters which aren’t really relevant to the storyI will most likely drop it as it’s a bit too much of a mess for me. Regardless keep writing bud
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author i only have one thing to say don't Stop don't Stopthe evil mc gets my readers kissthe character get my love but they will die anyway i suppose the world building is one of a kind i have never see such complex but complete and real like feeling it gives it CAN NO WILL BE A MASTERPIECE AS RIif you don't Stop what are you doingwe no atleast i will support it ( i don't know about others though so give everything you have (I hope you see this )
Amazing it’s the first story were it feels like it could actually happen . Every part of it is feels real the story has allot of potential and the author is using it in a creative way And the more you read the more you see it’s uniqueness i am sure that any experienced reader will be happily surprised. If there is any changes I will updated the review in the comments
I am fun of magical beast, mythological beasts, demon beasts, tamed beasts. but damn just reading the comments seems like the character buildup is crap. It isn't like I didn't read one but yeah, gonna read it.
I like the Man CHaracter very much. He very handsome. Upload more chapter please. I'm waiting for the new chapters. More chapter. More chapter. More chapter. please.
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