Two different stories
repeated chapters
Grammer errors
good read once everything is fixed
Good book so far, just confusing sometimes…Audrey instead of Vanessa..and Bruno as Bianca’s assistant..all in all not bad.Grammar is good as well.
Your blurb had me in a trance. I think i'm in love with your writing style.
When I initially read, I didn't pay much heed to the first 11 chapters or so, thus skipping over the kidnapping plot. It wasn't until I reached Chapter 100 that I realized its significance. Despite the excellent character development and engaging storyline, the setting leaves much to be desired. The prohibition on the protagonist's education due to their impoverished background, where only the eldest sibling can attend school for a better future, is understandable. However, the transplantee's resentment towards the original character (OC) is reprehensible. As someone from a modern era, she should empathize with the OC's struggles and depression, rather than expecting her to instantly adapt to a loving family dynamic.
The MC's behavior is despicable, especially his hatred for the OC and lack of affection towards her. His sudden change of heart when the FL (Female Lead) becomes attractive and financially successful is unjustifiable. Moreover, he never even met his own child. If the context were different, I might have enjoyed it more, as positive in-laws are rare in this genre. Overall, if one overlooks the initial chapters and the flawed characters, the writing quality and pacing are commendable. The short chapter lengths could have been improved, though.
Bro, if I'm not mistaken, there's a manhwa of this novel that's on hiatus right now. Do you happen to know where I continued here after reading the manhwa?
In summary, I found the novel both exhilarating and emotionally charged. Initially, I eagerly devoured the machine-translated version of the over 4,000 chapters, focusing on the captivating transmigration aspect. However, the story goes far beyond that, delving into world-building, philosophy, feminism, and societal norms. The protagonist's journey against all odds, her determination, and the development of complex relationships make for a compelling read.
The author handles themes like adversity, camaraderie, and the evolution of characters' bonds expertly. While some relationships grow stronger, others end tragically, showcasing the fluid nature of connections. The fight scenes are intense and unpredictable, leaving readers on the edge of their seats.
What's remarkable is the主角's growth, despite her occasional idiocy, which adds realism to her eventual strength. Her journey is not marked by cheats or easy triumphs, but rather through hard work and resilience. This novel stands as a testament to feminist ideals, presenting a nuanced portrayal of a female character without centering on love or traditional gender roles.
The book subtly critiques society, tackling issues like gender discrimination, dowry systems, and societal expectations. It's significant, especially considering its setting in a more conservative Asian context. I applaud the author for addressing such taboo topics.
Lastly, I admire the protagonist's independence and rejection of traditional female roles, such as motherhood or domesticity. The fact that the author maintains her character's integrity without resorting to plot twists is commendable. It sends a message that career success and happiness aren't tied to marriage or parenthood.
Overall, I wholeheartedly recommend this novel for its well-developed characters, thought-provoking themes, and thrilling action sequences. It's a must-read for those seeking an empowering female lead navigating challenges and fighting for strength in a unique and imaginative world.
As all CN quote, if there is Yin there will be Yang.
So, yea I saw that you were being aggressive in writing that comment, so I wanted to try that out too.
Plus, the book that becomes absolute shit later on part is true.
It does get weird around 200+ chapters and degrades completely by 250(ish) chapters.
My honest realistic comment-review about how I see this novel (7 likes, 2 dislikes, 2 supporting comments from other people) was deleted
So okay
Will align with the standards then:
"This is a great novel! WOW! Read it! Awesome! Cool!"
P.S. This is actually a good read, it`s just become dissapointing deeper into the story
Translation isn't the greatest in this novel, after reading through 90 chapters, it require some brain power. The author or translator is pretty bad at math, the math seem pretty bad or it could be a riddle? no idea.
-similar to other dungeons/gates/hunter etc. novels, the mc is pretty much similar to a summoner, except he only summon difference types of goblins so far from a fallen goblin kingdom after he became their lord. Of course he still have to find the goblins in other crack "dungeons" so he can gather them together in Ashvilam. He doesn't care about the goblin in the begin but later he decided to help them rebuild Ashvilam kingdom and find out some history/truth to what happen to the kingdom/goblin "sarahon" race.
Spoiler below if u want to save brain power,
enjoy reading ~
Before I keep going with the story I read it all the way to 712 were it suddenly stopped updating so I just wanna know if it's still worth reading past chapter 1000+
does he ever get younger and stop looking like an old man
Here I Go!