I refuse to believe this novel was more voted for than some of the others ones. They're not even trying to hide their under the table deals at this point.
I've read so many novels till now of this tipe,the MC looks forced writen and the same with the dialogs...so 4 stars is the maxim i can give,i don't know chinese to know if its the writer or the translator...
The storywriting is okay but the author seems to add way too much details. Like, around half of a chapter is mostly just them describing things.
I read a bit ahead, & the story seems to go on a tangent whenever it feels like it. Cool concept, wierd execution & read. 2/10
Although this book is very similar to others in the same genre, I am a huge fan and this is unique enough to get me excited for more more chapters.
Author-san, keep up the good work!!!
hello author
It's good i hope it get picked up. honestly the story is really interesting with nonhuman heroines (weapons) yeah it is unique because the mc power is basically like turning weapons into girls. this is suit my taste
This ha more than 1.7Million votes and webnovel has not picked it, purest example of how your vote does not matter to webnovel, and that in the end only webnovel has the final say
Its good and all but where spider man updates dude?
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Everything feels too forced and rushed. Too many mistakes in sentences where some words have nothing to do with that sentences which gets really confusing. The logic/reasoning is not throughly thought out because the reasons don’t match with how the author tries to portray the main character. Author needs to worry about quality above quantity because you say one thing which is enough but you want to add more to it which sometimes makes it confusing or unnecessary, there is probably a better way to explain this but not coming to my head right now. The author makes too many side comments as part of the narration of the story which brings down the quality. Also in your narrative you blame characters for their characteristics, which you created, don’t do that........ I have also noticed you try to add to many unnecessary stuff to a sentence and you end up combining two or three thoughts together which don’t make sense...... The biggest problem seems to be structuring the world building/ character building, you mention **** ton of stuff like realms and rare items when people have no idea what they are, I understand you say they are rare but that’s too much for the beginning of the story, it doesn’t help your reads give value to things, what I mean by that is as people read a story they tend to make sense of the world in the story and what has what value, but the way you write it devalues the “super rare items”. Don’t take offense this is a honest review you should try to fix many of these problems if not all, there are other problems but I lost track writing all these. I hope the author improves and fixes his/her previous chapters, I would suggest reading translated novels to get a better idea of how a cultivation novel is structured and there are some top original cultivation novels on this website too.
Bro I like it how you make a world and define them but make a op mc and you make him believe he is weak I hate it,don't take offense on this but it is better if you make the mc have logic us
Even through it s the first chapter but really great
If the author keep s going at this rate and incrises the updating speed than i am going to become a fan of him