I am loving this story so far it is a 5out 5 the author should keep doing a great job.I cannot wait to see this light novel reach 100s of chapters
Good Story. Need more update. update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.
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Really good, with an actually intelligent, non psychopathic MC. Be prepared for time skips. And be prepared for the most Mrs Marple-ish a Chinese MC is likely to get!
Wow just wow at first i saw the title i think this **** just gonna be same with "online" novel but i wrong wow so glad that im wrong Greatly enjoy the storyNice mc (for me :v ) Plot like it The scene when she/he dont know :v is great im im reading morning 3 :v cant sleep Anyway i enjoy this thank you author Support this bruhhh Btw more please :v
I've read up to chapter 549. The story so far is entertaining. You have epic battles, a smart MC and an interesting plot that unfolds over time. However, there is a few deal breakers. There is a disgusting amount of misunderstandings in this fic. It gets to the point that its so unbelievable that it becomes another form of plot armor. Then we got reoccurring themes. Where a battle happens, the demons are losing until the MC and his immortal army swoops in. They then proceed to steal everything, get over whelming praise for their 'sacrifices', before the gamers start to ask everyone for a mysterious quest and the MC tells a sob story for cash. This repeats itself every freaking time no matter what small arc or scenario that occurs. And finally, the thing I hate the most is how in Beta version 1.0, they have 50million people joining. What happen to it being only 50thousand? The author forgot about what he said and goes into great detail on how only the chineses are allowed to play the game and the westerners are crying about the unfairness. The westerns tried to reverse engineer the gaming capsule but they couldn't do it. Now they have to sit at home and watch the glorious chinese having fun. 'Its kinda obvious what this is hinting too' Besides all these issues, this fic is a nice time sinker. It is above the other chinese fics and on par with the gamer fics from korea. Give it a try and you'll enjoy it.Now a few issues I have with the plot. First, all the gamers are naked savages. Second, there is no defined form of leadership/control over the gamers. Third, the MC doesn't recruit anybody to his dungeon to fight for him it is only the chaotic gamers. Fourth, there is alot of foreshadowing of the MC, but nothing is ever explained until the author just wants to add random stuff to his backstory on a whim. Finally, there is no character growth what so ever.
A very good worldbuilding novel with a great MC. I've seen some people complain about some of the antagonists, but I think everything has been done well, at least until my current chapter 635. I would love to see an American version of this one, since it really plays to your country pride. The author clearly loves history and, unlike a lot of Chinese novels, there isn't a racist/jingoist undertone. The one international stuff is all pretty accurate, although it can sometimes be goofy.
Hey you thought you were talented with your rank 5 martial spirit? Well I have a rank 6 one so your trash compared to me. Then suddenly a young master with a rank 7 spirit comes by in his carriage and says, men kill these pieces of trash for blocking my way. But as that exact command happens a jade like beauty is seen flying in the sky. People gasp at her beauty and background and say, hey that's such and such from that one clan she has a rank 8 martial spirit. Clearly the carriage young master is trash compared to her. Angered of being shamed in front of the crowd the carriage young master rides away in shame, but at the corner of his eye he sees the MC laughing. Men kill that trash for me says the carriage young master. And so the cycle repeats of the beauty saving the MC causing more problems. That's the whole novel.
nope.. boring novel this one..drag one fight from chapter 5 all way to chapter 40???????????????????????????????
Translator needs more support so we can get more chapters.So Guys and galsss i plead u to rate this novel cuz im liking it soo much already that i want 2 chapters a day...im sure my fellow readers will help me or u could read this story and judge yourself and review it.
I love this story. The anime follows it pretty closely (more closely than the graphic novel) so I'm really excited to find a place to read it. Cannot wait for the rest!!!!
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