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It was sad really, Touch and Azailee both had loved the boy like a younger brother. But he was
"Wow, thank you. It turns out that you have secretly a reliable ability, Lie," said Tony while repeating the technique he had just learned.
dafuq! i never voted this... oh well, i guess i'll enjoy this novel at a restaurant or something...I hate the 14 character rule......fukdishitfukdishitfukdishitfukdishitfukdishitfukdishitfukdishitfukdishitfukdishitfukdishitfukdishit
love it keep it up man..........................................................................................................
Giving it a chance, the story seems familiar but gonna reading and see how it plays out.
Sir goldenstache I really liked the novel so far but I do recommend you to have some side quests or sub stories that later bunch up and make it big and important like how anvelope did for 'I'll surpass the mc ' or like in 'Jackal amongst snakes' .I also highly recommend for side quests to have more actions like you did for the gang conquest as I consider your forte to in building up and executing a thrilling battle even if its one sided annihilation by the mc.Or have new innovation by mc in the branch of aether and arcana like Inala from I'll surpass the mc or Lucien Evans from throne of magical arcana though I understand that Emir is the battle junkie a niche touch of brillance wouldn't hurt right?! Anyways thank you for the new perspective and keep up the good work and create great novels like cuttle fish that loves diving or En_trailji or ergen or harold , etc authors
Great novel... It would have been very popular, if not for locking it in such early chapters...
all the places are based on a fantasy trope. The updates are consistent and sheesh the MC's character design is hot. The story development is so-so.
Writing quality is 5/5. Update stability is 5/5 Story development is 5/5 Character design is 5/5 World background is 5/5 What more can I say? Yes I am a serial reviewer. Bite me.
From what I’ve read so far, the book is very good. It's just that the author did a good job of making Sofia annoying and hatable. Too good of a job qctually...
Good, keep it up and don't give up, writing can be very stressful trust me, but you could get better even better than some great novel writers of web novel.
