Brandon_Downtain
So far so gud. I've almost caught up with the latest chap uwu really enjoying it. Raiden is quite an interesting character, my personal favorite. The best thing I like about him is that he doesn't flush the toilet :)
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Kitabı soluksuz bitirdim. Öncelikle mutlaka devamını bekliyorum. Hikaye bence süper. Akıcı bir dille yazılmış. Maceranın içinde buluyorsunuz kendinizi. Şiddetle tavsiye ederim.
Sounds similar to another novel called bring a farm life to another world and hope it will be better then that other more recent farming novel.
Spoiler (I don't like to close it with spoiler tab:> hehe )
I SKIMMED all the raw just now around 480chapters, Cliche story sigh in novels where he can get rich and omniponent. MC's attitude kinda good compared to other with cheat system, MC is humble and not lustful but he will bared his fangs if someone threatened his loveones. Plot revolves around Entertainment and Business circle, no medical nor cultivation occured, his skills are reasonable (Godly) but not unscientific/supernatural (skills such as acting, writing,singing, directing,cooking, business etc that are the only I have seen on the whole story(i skimmed but I haven't notice those). Lot of face smacking happened but MC didn't initiated them, bunch of braindead Mobs love digging their own grave (generic lustful Youngmaster preying Swans)
Romance
Lot of girls fall in love with MC, but he is dedicated for one girl and rejected them all, but there is a second female lead who's business genius and an artist, she's willing to secretly support the MC and there's even that she's willing to sacrifice her life for MC, truly unrequited and unconditional love. FL likes cosplaying Catgirl and has close relationship with Second FL (sisters) so I think it's reasonable to end up with these 2 Treasured girl. Unlike other harem they build romance slowly MC at the start was unwilling to love other girl other than FL
The characters so far are great and so is the novel but I think it would be more interesting if we had a little bit more exposition of the world as we've basically heard nothing about it. The writing quality has been great so far though you shouldn't give up easily.
A decent story, its a little bland at first but as you get further into the story it gets a little better. im reading it mostly to fill in time between other stories but If it had more chapters or released chapters more offen id probably make it one of the main stories im reading.
If youre waiting on other authors to release nee chapters then this is a decent option to fill in your time while you wait.
There are a few errors in the writing however it doesnt detract from the story and isnt often enough to impact anything.
They could provide a little more background on the world, though with how the story is going it may be provided later in the story.
Character design is your basic Overpowered MC with a system style so its not entirely original.
The story is pretty interesting. there some grammartical mistake but understandable. Mc is smart and not genetic type of mc.
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"While others were struggling for clothes and food with their initial pet beasts, Macky was building the playground for his 100th pet beast."
This sentence summarises the novel. Change a few words in this sentence, and you'll know just how unoriginal this novel is. So unoriginal it may as well be copy and pasted. The only change? Protagonist's name has been changed...
Wouldn’t mind reading more, just not worth paying for 83 chapters based on the free ones due to large errors and forgetfulness.
Hopefully Webnovel changes the system some day.
im very upset that you have not finished this book if you have a problem then just go with the flow but please finish this book. I was going through such depression then I found this book and a couple others that you wrote then stopped those as well please I'll give my left hand for you to finish this one plese
Great story
