From when I started reading to where I am now, I would say that the concept of this story and the development is very good. The only thing holding this down would be that there are a lot of grammatical errors. So much so that I have to spend time trying to figure out what the authors means in some cases. While this takes away from the story, it isnt enough to stop me from reading this book! One advice I would give the author for improvement is obviously learning the english language, as well as trying to deepen the plot of the story! A couple examples I have from other books ive read would be that instead of the main character going through an event and then magically getting the ability to not register pain or care about pain, they make it so that the event is super discriptive and made it so that something happened to where the main character got used to pain. They describe it like, “Suwu felt like his skin was being flayed alive, his muscles being streched around his body, trying to compresses his bones into fine powder! His organs felt like they inflated so much that they were trying to rip apart his body to run away.” That type of discription.
Anyway I just wanted to give my opinion because I enjoyed your story and can’t wait for you to devlop as a writer!
The starter point is very nice and I have to congratulate the author cause it's a really good novel at all, I think everyone that like cultivation must try this novel
I'm already hooked I can't wait to see where this goes it's an Orginal novel that has gained inspiration from Avatar the Last Airbender I believe and become this VR game. I have high hopes for this and hope this can be released a lot.
It's a interesting story so far can't wait to read more chapters.
I'm sure you will enjoy it all if your ok with harem genre and OP MC, which is a bit more better than a normal harem storyline here because they have anime girl and a good quality in writing character design that makes every chapter have there own good progress...
overall it's a good thing to try (^._.^)ﾉ
unique storyline that different than average novel but still give you nice plot character development and honestly the girls get fall in love too fast but no problem i like it
Hello guys! Author here. I just want to tell you something before you click that read button. You won't regret reading this book! Because it's something you've never seen or read before. This book unravels the mysteries of one of the most important things of all—the heart. And it shows how important this heart is as regards our eternity. Your face may lie, your tongue may do the same but what is that thing that can never lie? It is your heart, and that is what determines where we all end up. Up or down, heaven or hell?
Honestly, even though the way that the MC is literally forging his body is a cool idea.
The character personality and the Antagonist is just so boring.
MC is just a classic powerful guy who is morally impervious. And the enemies are demon beast. It's like really?
One of the most boring things to read is when authors turn a natural disasters type problem into the main enemy.
Is dull and unenjoyable for anybody who atleast wants to be allowed think about who is right and wrong but instead gives a simplistic view... so if it changes tell me but until then leaving this with 2 stars.
It's a dungeons and dragon(DND) novel. Mc plays a game under Call of Cthulhu (CoC) settings which means it's the hardest difficulty. The turn off is how strictly they are making it DND with stat checks and dice rolls for every action. I couldn't recommend this unless you really like DND because it's not really immersive.
Ever wanted to witness in person the ascension of an Evil God? Here's your chance...welcome to the chronicles of Negary's Apotheosis. The Evil God, whom in so many other stories is the ultimate, final villain.
Sit back, and enjoy the ride as NEGARY DEVOURS ALL.
a good start, the world building is interesting. if there some downside in this novel is probably the mc personality in the start because it give me some mix messages I though he was a bit smart and have decent common sense but then at some later chap, he become a bit idoitic and inconsistent with his mindset, but author said it for the sake of character development. Well overall its a pretty good novel!
I really loved this, highly recommend this. the plots are really refreshing, the way things were describe fits my imigination really well. Character shows different trail and hits different. I loved this keep it up author. [img=recommend]