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Initially, I felt confused and curious after reading the first chapter. However, after reading the next chapter, I understand that the way the story is presented is unique and makes the reader curious and unable to stop reading. Update again chapter....Good Author...?????
Damn Is it just me but i feel like the MC is very similar to the one in " Everybody is Kung Fu Fighting, While I Started a Farm".Even the world setting share many similarities at least till the first 30 ch till where i read.Like that same dumb op mc who interprets everything in retarded ways though tht's probably to add a comedic undertone to the usual cultivation stories.....
Even though it is just a short novel for now, I think it looks pretty promising. The setting is nothing new, but the mc so far is very likeable. It is also clear to me that some parts of the games plot are being intentionally concieled, so it makes a bigger impact in the future. That or it is really just a very popular game with a sucky plot. Anyway, to be honest, so far this deserves the five stars. We have to see if you can keep the quality going, and maybe make the chapters a little lenghtier.
I really love this. Please continue to make more chaptersssss. I will always give my powerstone to this story. So please . Thanks . Goodluck . Fighting
Story seems super interesting and what makes it better is tha you used POV in a video game genre game! Really curious how will this story continue Great job author ?
Thank you for checking out my novel. I will be updating this novel daily.The plot of the story is based on virtual reality, and the experiences the main character, Vicky has in and out of the game.Each character has a complex personality, that I hope you guys will love throughout the story.Please feel free to leave comments and reviews about the novel. I hope you guys enjoy ^-^
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I think overall the flow and story is good and addictive ???Really wish the author update again so that I can read it more ???Hopefully this year continue
It starts a little slow but is overall a good read. It ends up being quite funny and hard to put down. Although in parts it does get a bit repetitive but I think the author has sorted out their storyline more now. Overall it’s a big thumbs up ? from me.
This story uses the yuriharem + system + reincarnation + cultivation in way that makes sense. This seems to be well planned story. Can't wait to read more.
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