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amazing character development love the new abilities and the chance that more will come into the future. this novel has so much potential, love it!
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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
I kinda like it... I love the idea behind it... and I really want to read it... but it just does not strike a cord with me. I have read 23ch... and I had to force myself to read it for the last 10 ish chapters. I just don't like that the colonists are experiencing hardships at every corner... nothing feels like it's going right for them. Even though it probably will work out in the end. It doesnt feel like progress is being made and that makes the story feel very slow paced and thus boring. Everything else about the story is fine, the grammar, the style of writing is ok, the world building really feels like it will lead to something great with all the little tidbits that are beeing dropped. It is just that the story does not grab my attention and nothing so far has been something that would make me feel excited/happy for the MC or his colonists... everything that happened so far just made me feel worried and anxious or just straight up disinterested. For every step that is made it feels like they make 2 steps back and that some new problem arises.Well I have rated it highly because I do think that it is a novel with an interesting premise... and that it will probably lead up to something very interesting later when the colony grows and when, I'm guessing, we get a more of a kingdom building aspect which I always find enjoyable. Tho I don't want to torture myself reading something I don't find interesting just to get to something interesting after 200 chapters. Good Luck with the story!
The cover 5/5The synopsis 5/5The writing? It was amazingly written and it surprised me that Webnovel has such quality writer. This is a hidden gem and I'm glad to have discovered it.
This novel has the potential to be really nice and the system is also okayish. The system's way of making the MC grow is seen as pointing towards a harem route, but it could also make the story go towards the MC making others fall for him while he stays loyal to his girlfriend. It would be difficult to do this, but I'd like to have some hope that the Author did this well. I hope this does get more chapters translated soon.
Hi everyone~ this is the author, supporting the story.
First of all, one funny fact is I don't play chess. I wrote this story out of curiosity and imagination towards how the chess is played, so in short, this is a Human Chess Game that I just depicted inside my head.
Everything happening here is purely fictional but is also something that sometimes happen in reality.
My characters are molded out of their traumatic dark pasts, making them into the TWISTED characters that they are now. Slowly, as the story progresses, I want the readers to understand why and how they ended up that way, and, if possible, sympathize with them.
If you like realistic backstories, action, a hint of humor, and a slight taste of drama, then you could take a peek and see if you like it. If not, then I suggest you just ignore this story and find a better suiting one for you because I also cannot assure you that this story is the best.
Thank you for your patronage~
I rate this story 5/5 it has a great plot and has pretty good character development in the early stages which is good and I like how the story line is unique a little in its main purpose. The updates are late but I found out why so I won't be deducting any points from the score. Other then that I can't wait for future chapters and I wish the author luck for this story.
I like villain stories, too bad they aren't popular on this site.
I only know one other story with a villain protagonist as evil, and that's Gu Master (aka Reverend Insanity).
