this is a nice book and it has potential and you are a very good writer so have a good day and keep making more chapter looking forward to it.
If you love reading repeated information every chapter, this story is for you! IGNs not having capitals is annoying aswell but
Why don’t you release more chapters author MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
It's trash...
I've read up to 6 chapters and that's only how I long I could last to...
The main problem is how incoherent the story is, the sister of the Empress overthrows her and then wants to humiliate her by making her do it with the lowest of the low... MC is somehow chosen to be the first.. Why wouldn't they choose the ugliest or something like that?
Then, the family gets burned by a dragon and we learn the Empress has a background that even the dragon master don't dare to go against... Then how did the family dare to humiliate her like that? Oh wait it's incoherent who cares. Also, the dude wanted to make the girl his plaything then suddenly 1 chapter later, he don't deliver...
It's incoherent, it's trash, it's pure wish fulfillment. Maybe it gets better but it surely won't if just the premise is at 0
1 of my favourite novels I'm reading and also new chapters are more regular than most.
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Loving it, it’s a mix of actual story and erotic encounters, would love to see more of this and fast!
I can see this becoming way better if you fixed small mistakes such as misspellings or typos
This story made me understand game books a lot more. I usually prefer this as Manga. I can't wait for this to be a comic it was made for it.
Intriguing and interesting, the progression is very nicely paced. Neither rushed nor slow. I love the tempo, the MC is likable. In my opinion it's a hidden gem. Definitely worth trying this one guys. Good Luck to the Author.
The synopsis of the story caught my attention because of what it described and the plot that the story of the novel has is very interesting. I recommend this story if you like science fiction stories. Keep it up, Author