Chapter 208 fucking annoys me
Chapter 69 Song Jia would be pleased ♥
I was bored and read the summary and what the fuck???Male lead basically rich and famous manFMC is celeb and quit job to live with family and marry but then fiance cheatedHe cheat cause male lead set him upBullshit on shitmakes BS squared
I think this novel is kinda beyond my expectations. At first, I thought it was a normal game online novel, but it turned out to be unbelievably fun. And the thing I like most might be MC's perspectives, he isn't stupid but such a cool character. So, I'll keep waiting for more chapters :)
no space marine ??? then bye for now maybe in future when I had more time to waste I come back to read warhammer that had no space marine
not good, contradicts alot of things through out story, no depth in romance or kingdom building or well story plot in general, need proof reading i mean like "she was mad and couldnt continue eating so she stopped talking and continued eating" and this type of writing continues to happen alot throughout the story
Move along and look elsewhere for something to read. Each chapter seems to use 'chat' as filler for word count to drive the price up and the power scaling rate is simply ludicrous. Full of obvious propaganda, poor grammar (translation software problems most likely) and lacking any depth of story. The foreshadow attempt was about as hidden as a car in an empty parking lot. save time and don't bother.
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does the author plan to continue this story? from what I've read so far it has a very interesting plot line. I'd be very interested to continue reading whatever the author puts out there for this story. so far it is very entertaining. LOL
PLEASE continue this story. I'd be more than happy to support the continuation of this story if the author continues.
The main reason I gave this novel such a low rating is that the author seems to constantly forget about previous things that YY has learned and/or characters that contribute to his power ups.
One key example is his aspect totem, the 9 neonate. It is supposed to grow along with YY since it is a "beast mark of life" which allowed it to go through a heavenly tribulation back in the Tian Yuan world. However, nothing has happened to it since then. YY has grown multiple realms (nearly 4 full realms if I'm not wrong), but the 9 neo is still at the 1st tribulation which doesn't make any sense. He has eaten how many high level resources and nothing made it go through the 2nd tribulation? I call BS.
Another example is the godly OP bow he received from the God Advent Tower spirit. From what I remember, it was made from divine beast parts which is on the same level of his 3-legged golden crow(don't quote me on this, didn't feel like re-reading that whole arc for this review). YY could use around 5-10% of its power when he was at the yuan opening realm(again, don't quote me on that), but he has never even touched the bow since leaving the Tian Yuan world. It's almost safe to assume that the author completely forgot about the bow entirely.
Lastly, I gave this novel this rating because the author once said back when this novel used to be on GravityTales that he would flush out the main story within 500-800 chapters. This notice was around chapter 550 or so, but I have yet to see where the main story is supposed to go. I can see that YY will fight with the White Lunar Empire soon and obviously win due to plot armor and 1337 hax, but nothing about what happens from there. There is no big bad enemy at the end of the tunnel, no dark forces watching from the shadows, nothing so much as an inkling of knowledge on who/what YY will be fighting to end the story. I guess you could say that I've been waiting for something to be revealed and yet I feel disappointed every time.
You could take my rant/review for a grain of salt, but this is just how I feel about this novel. I've been reading almost since the beginning, and I've just longing for the author to come up with more story telling that doesn't involve near useless random/stepping stone characters.
Thanks for your time. :]
Sadly this novel doesn't give me the feels of HYPE.
I only read this because of the shared universe storyline/related series WDQK and BTTH which are both SUPERB novels.
You make me discover DSI on xianxiaworld and I thank you for that but now please drop this novel and give us a chance to read it till the end.