It's not a bad fanfiction with an idea similar to the lord, but as for me, I need to open up the world more, work with the characters, make them less flat, give them character. To reveal more about the game he played about the kingdom, it's also worth working on the character of the Main Character. Let's just say it would be interesting to follow the humble protagonist, who has almost no flaws, and power does not spoil him. It will be an interesting story if the main character is not perfect, but with his own problems. for example, arrogance or some other qualities. A person who did not have power before , and then suddenly has power, cannot remain the same person. It is also worth revealing more about magic. Our main character does not use magic, but only skills, that is, he will learn how to use magic, he will become stronger, maybe not much, but it will add a variety of attacks. Revealing the magic would be interesting. I also ask the author to work on the mind of the main character's opponents, I understand our MC hero, but some victories will only bring boredom. Make sure that His Opponents are also smart, otherwise he kills the best adventurers and marshals of the kingdoms somehow quickly. I'm also thinking about other worlds, too, because now he He knows that there are other worlds and it is a sin not to take advantage of this. in general, Istria is not bad, there are pros and cons, there is something to work on, but most importantly, I hope the author listens and makes the story even better, as well as explain the MC's actions, his plans and everything else, we will add more specifics.
Hiiiii, I hope that you can release more chapter for this story. I really like it????????
Just wow. has so much potential I’m so excited for you keep up the good work and just enjoy
I tried to give it a shot because I don't like to believe most reviews. believe them for this story.it's a good system idea but the grammar is just odd. "upbeat young man" was stated to get on nerves and I'm like "no way." it's worse than they mentioned. one PARAGRAPH had it 4 or 5 times. author, I appreciate the attempt. I would stress that practice makes perfect. in future stories, please try to look at synonyms for your MC to avoid repetition.
While a familiar story line, it is handled and written well, adding nuance and freshness.
This story had great potential... potential that was ruined by a single genre, the ntr. It's incredible how a single stupid decision can completely ruin something, I would have liked to see this story in the weekly or monthly top, it's a shame, I hope you don't make the same mistake in your other novel
This story is GOOD!What? self promotion, who me? I would never!
I'm loving this so far!! Cannot decide if I am Team Jungwook or Team Daejung tho, I love them both sm? Please please more regular uploads, there are just SOO many questions that I need answers to!
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Alex’s story is a hauntingly beautiful dive into the complexities of identity, mental health, and human connection. Their introspective nature and struggle for self-expression feel deeply authentic, making them a character you can’t help but empathize with.The relationship between Alex and Emma adds a tender layer to the narrative, offering moments of quiet solace and understanding. The symbolism of Alex’s notebook and their dark, layered clothing reflects their inner world with subtle brilliance.This isn’t a flashy or fast-paced tale it’s a raw, thoughtful exploration of life’s deeper questions. If you’re craving something meaningful and introspective, this story is a must-read
Not my type of story but it's quite interesting. The writing seemed a bit hard to read. This story is new to me. Anyone who likes new concepts, it's a must read.