this is one crazy novel well feels like there are 2 MCand world has started building itself with words oaf author and such enormous potential is rare i hope to see more of this madnesseach character is given well deserved attention and it's not too much as well and grammar and grip on language feels like author is crazily firm in them
Decent concept, Interesting characters that are mostly fleshed out. It has some of the small issues of a boy with the mind of an old man not acting his age from time to time. However overall does an above average portrayal of this compared to most authors.However things very quickly go down hill because the author decides to do a massive time skip. Removing basically any chance the main character has to grow both in power and emotionally. I stuck with it to around chapter 500 because I genuinely enjoyed the beginning and was excited to see the growing phase. Unfortunately the author never really managed to capture my attention again after this.The writing is not very gripping or suspenseful. Like sure there is "supposedly" some sinister plan going on in the background. But there's no sense of urgency. The villains all fall flat, and the author doesn't really do a very good job at holding your interest. The whole novel reads closer to a slice of life with a harem of underage women than anything else.Overall I think boys aged 15 and under would find enjoyment in this story as it reads more like a harem of underage characters than anything deeper. Overall I'd say great characters and world building but terrible execution. Definitely a below average read.
This is more of a question than a review. I read many novels on this app and I just cannot stand bad grammar.Im on chapter 5 and i wanna ask if the writing gets at least a little better cause if not, then im afraid i will have to drop this.(im not an english speaker myself so i understand some errors, i probably messed up something in my review as well, but just cant stand first chapters)
Trully stellar work, Higly recomended to read.Only one problem and that is that the world looks like cultivation world and use of empiral measurement system
I think author mix onion flavor in this!
So much feelings here!
My poor little heart cannot take it anymore, so touching here be careful....
Good book, premature ending though. Grammar is decent and consistent. The pacing is rather slow and some things are needlessly stretched out in terms of dialogue and descriptions but it could just be personal taste. The mc has a rather unique class in terms of other books that really made me enjoy the entire process of seeing him adapt. Which the author would've expanded more/made more use of the duel skill because it can make for some great action scenes but its possibly he had planned to before he dropped the book. Good book though and definitely worth the read.
The character is a depiction of a real indian family and the whole infamily foghting feels exactly,can relate to a huge degree,The background is so great ,its real,update is good, I love it and recommend whoever is reading this to atleast read ten chapters before you write a bad review
Not that bad not my thing though, but for being named divine lucky star he’s way too unlucky read too 55 when he got another unlucky, i mean unlucky,lucky,extremely unlucky, luvky,normal,unlucky i think these are the ones he got
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The story tells of a rise and reincarnation of a slave to be become strong and with good heart and spirit willingly help others in need. Kudos to the author and the translators.... More chapters please....
A great novel that is hidden.. found by chance and found a unique cultivation system...good world building and characters....all i have left is to thank the author of this work
You have to start the reviews on a high note before it goes down.Release Rate: UnknownPage length: 1000 wordsIf you guys have any ideas u can comment it or review the novel