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Wow!! it's amazing.
I mean the way the whole storyline is written and the way everything is explained. Chef kiss !
totally hooked , I was able to imagine the plot in my head which to me is the best part of writing a story.
I will recommend this book to whoever read this review.
all the best and good luck.
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story is a 6 year old that has been betrayed by family, can't feel anything and expects people to treat him like an adult or he threatens them (with no capability).
so a worthless child that insists that he is an adult.
Okay where do I start….
I dont really understand why this novel has such a high rating. I started reading it only because I generally like this kind of story and it had a high rating. Now after about 60 Chapters I’m dropping it out of the following reasons:
- Fighting in general is just unrealistic. Take the first few chapters for example: Untrained, weak and stupid MC gets chased by a pack of wolves. He climbs on a tree, breaks off a few twigs, somehow magically sharpens them and then throws them like olympic champion and impales all enemies….Of course ! And stuff like that happens again and again.
- The System/Powerscaling is just completely random. He basically just kills wolfs at first, which are like the weakest creatures, and suddenly he is the stongest guy in town. As if every other citizen never fought a single battle. Apparently the wolves are pretty abundant in this reason but only he leveled up significantly. I mean he is the hero but as far as I know, that just means he has no level cap. A System is a good way to set up a frame for your story. How do things work? What are you capable off and what do you need to do to get stronger. Doesn’t really work if your MC is playing by different rules! And dont even talk about the 400 ultimate skills he colllects left an right from every mop character that exists .
- The MC is just annoying….he starts as a guy who has basically no self esteem, no real will to live and who doesnt stand up for himsel….that itself is not a bad thing, it’s just how the story is. Then he gives up his humanity and becomes a typical cliche villain who explains his evil plan, mocks his opponent for beeing week and then gets nearly killed in the next second .
He just feels inconsistent….For example he just knows lots off stuff that he actually shouldn’t know just because he read a book for a few hours and in the next second he makes completely stupid decisions, like killing three guys and stealing their wagon afterwards. I mean if i kill someone the first thin i do is stealing their car and park it in my driveway
The story is too good and its have a nice plot and I like the concept of the story looking forward to reading more chapters from you and thanks
Weirdly i absolutely love this novel to the deep of my heart..... And will probably always be my favorite novel. Idk if its because of how its written or because of the proggresion in the story. I fell in love with this slice-of life slow story like apart from a few people you can feel that most of them are real and fresh with different personalities
I thought I was on last week's trial read, this is just sad .................................................................................
there is already a manhua of it. it's called I have 9 female disciples, it have around 200 chapters. there is already a manhua of it. it's called I have 9 female disciples, it have around 200 chapters.
All around a great read so far and I’m definitely looking forward to being able to read more in the future. Also I have to say I just love the little brother, he’s so cute
Ichibi, Nibi, bokuwa Tobi!
So much filler, so much dumb characters. I'm astonished with author's ability to make something THAT bad.---------‐----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------