LordJ
The story is interesting and has potential... I'm very intrigued by how the Hunter System would be as the story moves forward... However, the concept of the system itself needs a bit of background or introduction for readers who are not familiar and only starting to read system novels like me... Also, your book has so much dialogue, at least 75% I think. It kind of looks like a movie script or a manga / comic... It's not bad but when I try writing like that, I get a harsh rejection from my editor... "remember that you're writing a book not a script"... those are Webnovel's words from writing guidelines.
Interesting story, it has a good plot and storyline, the characters are amazing, it has a huge potential in the future. I highly recommend this book
?I don't want it to be short until I feel like rereading it
Then itll need to contain necessary stuff only
Do you usually skip chapters for reading novels ?
I love all your books! curious to know when book 4 will be out, the genius delta.
Awesome story, I loved it. Kudos to the author.
I love this book so many elements are used just beautiful
not recommend this book it's say completed but no ending..advice to all the readers there read the last part or last chapter first before start ...
Loved the book all the way to the end.
loved this and couldn't put it down
Awesome book. Intriguing well developed characters. I can’t wait for more stories.
love what I have read so far
