Aliiireza
Love it! I like this sort of novel the best so I hope you can continue to write it at comfortable pace and not burn yourself out. I like the mix of different fantasy elements too keeps it fresh.
As good as it is, there is alot of time skips and no details. Just listing out mc deeds majority of the time. Needs detail of other people and more dialogue because it feels more of an outline of a story. Sad because I felt there might've been something but with no character there is no story.
The story isn't bad for what it is. There's not much character progression after the transmigration. The progression of the MC's strength has a problem. There's free attributes that the MC constantly earns. Yet we are left wondering if he uses them and how he allocates them. There's also chests but the author does not consistently tell us what is in the chest after they are opened. So you are left contemplating the MC's stats and load out. It is frustrating after a while. The author definitely isn't fleshing out the details.
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Stereotypical opening MC is reborn and wants revenge for the original body. Just once, I would like for an MC to say screw that. Anywho ignoring my tangent the plot moves quick enough, but nothing new.
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The prelude to all legends. Thank you so much for translating these chapters. I am so HAPPY to read more of TKA especially about the beginning of Glory here, the dynasty of early Excellent Era.Thank you for sharing more of TKA with us. I can't move on from the main story and then there is this story too. This journey is so rewarding and now you reward us with these prequel of TKA. I will always love TKA. For the Glory! Be shameless, Be Happy!
Really good story so far, the character development is great and the game system is consistent. The author doesn't forget about what abilities the MC has which is great.
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this seems good give raw
