It’s definitely a good novel I love the way it starts off, it reminds me of your other book in my bloody hit novel all in all great book love the mc and I have nothing but gratitude for you writing this.
Has to be one of the best novels I’ve read. The unique idea, which is insane! And world building, which is extremely well done. I love how different the character is from the others on this app, and I ADORE the fun facts at the end of the chapters! :)So excited to see more!!!
So first off, not my cup of tea so take what I say with a grain of salt...
To avoid spoilers, lets just say that this story is missing some tags. Like "Tragedy", "Blackmail", "Betrayal", "Slavery", "Extortion", "Rape" and "Grimdark". Lots of trigger warnings needed.
The summary made me think this was going to be a story where the MC gets a "system" or uses "game-like elements" to quickly become OP and face slap the people who made him a vampire and enslaved him but that is not what happens... at least not in the first 50 chapters. I tried to give the story a fair shot; the author himself admits the first 4 chapters are not great and that this is a repost of his first ever story but I got to 50 chapters and had to quit.
Its hard to give examples without spoilers but any one of my suggested tags would have been a deal breaker for me normally so I cant reccomend this story.
P.S.
The MC is also reborn from modern Earth so he makes a lot of references but since the setting is a fantasy world it feels real jarring and destroys any chance of immersion. Usually I dont mind if the reincarnated MC invents pizza or makes an anime joke but in this dark fanatsy setting it feels awkward.
Any one know the name of the original work, as in before it is translated? Like the Chinese name of novel if it is translated from Chinese?
Looking for stupid MC?
Looking for "I will do stupid things and get a setback but it will be fortune for me, MC?
Then this novel is for u! *Clap clap*
This novel has a good concept and plot (I think it might have). The only problems are the constant errors. Not grammatic errors but text error where some paragraphs don't make sense due to the wording.
Author, I have tip that you can use while editing your chapters.
First write your chapter and then wait at least 30 min before editing your chapter. Before you wait the chapter ia still fresh in your head so everything makes sense for you. But after you wait you see the things you could have done better.
This is why editors are so great. But I assume you can't get an editor so just follow the tip above and you'll be most likely off better.
Ps. I got this tip from a experienced author, but I was too lazy to implement this into my novel, although I probably will do it.
I’ve already read the full novel on another website and have to say it is one of my all time favourites! There are plot twists, satisfying endings for the villains, a great FL and a good ML. The story line puts the ML and FL’s love to the test and the story falls into the category of historical,romance, drama and a bit of magic.
~*Even if the ending isn’t as satisfying as I wished it to be ( don’t know what happens to the other characters after the whole conflict was resolved), I still loved it!*~
<>Thumb up author!<>
The story is very interesting story. The scenery and the characters actions is best described. However, punctuations and grammar issues needs to be proofread and be corrected.It's best to find someone to edit it. Keep it up author!
Easy to read. The plot is really interesting. Detective. The novel is very good, quality content, good writing! I really liked the novel. The only negative is the update! I was surprised that having 20 chapters, the novel has few views. But everything was explained by looking at the content.
But in vain, people do not read this novel, it is written very high quality! The plot is fresh, the intrigue is preserved, dynamic text. A very good romance! Who wants to read a really worthwhile story, then here, read the chapters and you yourself will understand that this work was written by a talented author who can write!
great! good job! Added to the library!
I like the novel but I'll stop ch 30. Author should read other novels on how it goes, pacing to fast for me, too many things happen short amount of time. Also one thing i hate in novel, they tend to give mc problems/hurdles every now and then, like give him a damn brake i hate it in xianxia/wuxia novels. Thats all i would love to read more but if this keeps same i wont give a shot to read this again
. need more
i read a few chaps and its quite good, it is a worth read while staying at home. though the system only gives him a sword yearly... that means for a 100 swords, he needs to wait for 100 years.. and thats tooo freakin' long.. but its a fast build, he is 2 years and he is already merciless, and i love that. its unlike those self-claimed justice heroes that dont kill... and after a few days, he found his woman dead, killed by the person he spared.