I checked out the Raws and a little too much nationalism for my liking. A few sprinkles here and there I don’t mind but when it’s a supposed fantasy world but throw in real life countries and then basically glorify your country every second sentence ruins the novel. Basically only limited interesting stuff to read when he was using the gaming clone smh
That’s my 2 cents on the novel
brilliant trial read so far please pick this. its the best trial read this week imo. the story has progressed a lit in the first 20 chapters cant wait for the rest.
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every encounter seems forced , i read upto 50+ chapters and its seems like i am reading something with no proper background or any interesting story development . After reading the synopsis i though if a story is inspired by Little Tyrant how bad the story progression can go? But the Author showed that , he can make is so bad that even an interesting plot can be made into lackluster and girls collection story. I guess Author did not remember the Little Tyrant story part but just the wet dreams he had after reading Little Tyrant . I had high hopes while reading 20+ chapter which was going quite well , but it took a nose dive.
the story progressed fine at first, then it became a sorrowful pity party of unfulfilled threats and failed urgency that has the slow burn of a middle school fight. I like the story but I have read at least 8 chapters of petty squabbling, abuse, pointless fevers, and situations that could have been better if more communication and trust was shown instead of naivety.
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Es una excelente historia me cautivó desde el principio.
Espero que la sigan publicando y no la dejen abandonada como muchas otras obras eso sería una lastima
It takes time for me to do a review because I really want to read the book and I enjoyed every chapters. Keep the good work dear author hope to read more of your work