Skill: learning for the first time/first glimpse of the door/entering the hall/understanding/mastery/reach the pinnacleCultivation technique: introduction/skillful/proficient/attention to detail/perfect
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I didn’t realize this had an English translation :0 I read this using machine translation like half a year ish ago and can honestly say that even with the quality of machine translation it’s one of my favorite webnovels. It’s got good fights, power progression, amazing character development (besides maybe the blue hair Hainnal family person, or I like most of her character… besides one aspect), and has some really good pacing throughout (it’s short and doesn’t overstay its welcome). The author has a penchant for speaking in symbolic declarations or something every few chapters (like the author will refer to the characters as “the boy”, “the girl”, “the star”, “his world”, etc… idk how to describe it, but it’s really obvious if you read it XD), and I find it kinda funny how often it happens (but also very cool). But yes. I also really enjoy the manhwa (of the same name)! It’s one of the few adaptations that is faithful to the original and actually improve reader experience! Anyway, it’s time for me to reread…
Besides some awkward sentences this story was really interesting! I love the take on this horror story. Keep up the work! The only thing this novel really needs is . . . MORE
I love it! It's a stable and fluent read as I did not see any mistakes in grammer/etc. yet (ch. 36) (could be because my low english skills but I think its perfectly done).Can't say anything 'bout the updating stability yet as I binged it but it says 11 chapters a week ... great!The story development is kinda slow compared to other novels (again, could be because I usually binge read 100 to up to 500 chapters at once) but its perfect for a story with a blacksmith as protagonist as actual forging is an important part of such novels. Didn't even find plotholes yet, but alot of humourus references.And last but not least the worlbackground. It's really well done. Without trying to spoil too much it seems to be a post apocalyptic world but not the normal nuclear bomb scenario but it uses the climate change. This gives birth to interesting and new enemies and enviromental conditions. A (in my eyes) unique and nice approach to the genre.
I think that this is an interesting story. I like the whole pre-historic concept and the world background that I want to keep reading it.I also like that the male lead is dependable and has a good head on his shoulders. Good job Author!
This story is really good. The beginning was a little slow, but when you read more of it, you won't be able to stop. Five stars!!!There is some small mistakes such as grammar and other small things, but you won't really notice. I'm not really sure about the stability of updates, but in the last few days, there has been a new chapter every day.Although the beginning of the story was a little boring, it quickly became very interesting and exiting to read.The story has chapters from another POV than the MC, and even though these are kinda boring to read at the beginning (because the MCs POV is always exiting and you get kinda pissed off when you have been wondering what would happen after the last cliffhanger, but then you get a non-MC chapter) they are probably important in the story as a whole, Rome wasn't built in one day.We haven't really heard a lot about the world yet, but I think the author has planned something big.
Wow, this is an amazing piece of art. The grammar and flow of the story as whole flows. But mostly I admire the author's ability to keep my attention stuck on every word he writes. Even if it hurts to say this, this is a level of writing my novels might not be able to reach........yet. Regardless good job, and I hope you update more.
I don't want to be shameless. To be honest, I'm only writing this for fun and forging my English. If you have problems with it, I don't care. If you don't like it, then don't, no one is forcing you to read it. If you want to trash talk my novel, spare me from that.Goodluck at reading this crappy novel.
I think that the story will be interesting... Can't wait to see what awaits the young Oliver! I hope that the story won't be too predictable and that the characters will be complex.
Here is a maybe great or maybe not great idea, what if after the resistance exceeds 100% to 101% the attack heals the person being hit......................
honestly this novel so far has been great Its actually really a fresh story with an interesting universe I just hope the other can keep moving forward with it I'm positive it will eventually grow in popularity so keep it up author?