This novel is not what I expected, and I've only read 10 chapters (which also means this review doesn't have any spoilers past what could already be inferred from the synopsis). First off, writing quality - the language is sophisticated but readable, with vivid descriptions. It has a natural flow that quite literally had me raving out loud about it - I'm a sucker for good quality writing. Story development, I can't say much about for the time being, similar with update consistency, but I've given them 5 stars because if this novel continues as it is now, it is absolutely deserving of them. The character design struck me from the first chapter, because it feels genuine! The dialogue is natural, the actions seem as though a real person might make them. Sure, there's occasionaly what I'd consider a 'movie action' which is slightly more... cheesy than what would be real, but the most important thing is that it doesn't break the immersion. Finally, the world building is disgustingly good. Mixture of ancient and modern settings... this is an incredible story! I'm honestly enamoured by it, so kudos to the author! You've done amazing
(I will start with the positive critics before the negative ones. ?)No lie, at the beginning of this novel I was like "this is gonna be a drag ?" but I'm glad I didn't drop it. It didn't take me long to be hooked. Reading this novel has made me realise that I have overrated *a lot* of novels. I am amazed how the writer mixed many controversial ideas into this...and make it a bomb without making everything jumbled up or confusing. Like how? I couldn't drop my phone after I began reading this novel. I would not be surprised if he was a professional writer. Psychological comedy drama romance revenge rebirth action undercover mystery .... The theme list goes on and on. The diversity not only lied in the themes but also the culture, depicted in the plot and setting...it has been well joined no gaps at all. Most novels on this platform are kind of predictable when it came to the romance, but here, all my guesses kept on being shut down and unlike the others, the romance is so sweet sexy and pure at the same time. I have been amazed There is no overlap in the characters which is quite common, since it is difficult to create and present completely different personas when writing. It's easy to mix them up or end up loosing the depth of the character. But surprisingly the writer pulled it off! The novel is no lie a great one it has potential to be best selling, as in yes it can enter the market...and I would buy it! It has potential to even be produced into series or anime without doubt. But there is room for improvement. For example, the "warnings" about the content having possible violence or sexual content destroys the flow of the novel. Like am enjoying the book, am so into it and then boom these sentences that are not even part of the story jump out of my face like what on earth? I suggest they use icons on the chapters themselves to warn readers and possible mature content so we don't have to waste..er I mean delay our interaction with the characters. Like I came across a whole paragraph *during* the *climax* of the story warning me about possible mature content! ? like did you have to use half of my screen with something you can use a symbol for? And please make Kyle bisexual ? Hehehe
A copy of another novel, can't remember the name other than the protagonist Han qianqian. Ends abruptly at chp 430, seems many chapters were skipped. Disappointing. I wish to get a refund.
it's shit and No just no -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Wonderful story telling and from a reader who has read the previous book Top star this one has much better scope and story. The characters are well described with a clear world background. A well written start The only problem is a bit of lack of emotions conveyed. But this gets better over time so no problem
the English in the beginning is a bit messy but if you go to chapter 50 and up it gets better .the updates are good it's frequent and the quality doesn't drop.the story is amazing and it has the good amount of ways it can go, it can go very dark and serious but there are also bits where the author tries to make jokes.the characters are amazing you get a good grasp of what there like and how the look so you can image it better in your headthe world background is alright i mean it's a bit typical in the beginning but further down the line it does have a good plot twist for the world.
I am already loving it dear author. ❤️ I must say you have incredible writing skills
Beautiful story. Love it!
Gosh this last chapter really moves me .. thank goodness he came around . He really is a good alpha n now let’s go get his Luna back ! Thank you author for spoiling us lol love all the updates xx
It's a good story, but the grammar and spelling errors are getting me. Overall love the book though.
loved loved loved