thank you for the info ... let me continue with the novel
I have been reading CF other work TOMA and didnt like it that much(finished 26% of the book), but now that he is more experienced idk if i should give this a try, Anyway i will be reading something else first and will leave this comment here if anyone wants to recommended this and is it better than TOMA
Well, he could still salvage the situation if Orpal finally dies a miserable death.
Lol yea Chinese novels are kinda quick on the killing. Although I am not asking for the MC in this story to go on a killing spree what I do want is some common sense. Forcefully PAUSING a war is far more destructive in the long term since both sides will still be hostile to each other and will just fight again in the future. Letting one side win actually keeps casualties and resource expenditure low as well as reducing the duration of a war. The author here is too naive to realize that and whats worse if you read later on he makes the MC give out better weapons and technology to everyone... Which is just plain stupid.
Calm down man... i am getting anxiety attacks coz of u :(((
Yeah. Mc is a beta.
I feel like puking reading this novel who ever wrote this novel you should try something else this job is not for you.
I really love the book... author please keep up the good work ?
this book reminds me of the book that i lost 3 years ago
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The writing quality is actually pretty high in this book, cant say much about world building as it just started but.
It seems promising.
Now a few tips that i think could help are that, you probably shouldnt add any type of romance. With it not really making sense as the Mc is another species. And dont add a female Paragon as it will just feel forced and
ruin the story. Also dont make the protagonist a hero or antihero that tries to save the world. Because i feel like its getting over used and wouldnt match the Mc personality. Now he dosent have to be a villain either. He could just be willing to do what it takes for his goal.
But overall i like where the story is going.??
Good Story