Lord_of_the_void
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
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Nice book.
OP MC , who isn't racist for once.
I really wish I could enjoy this story, but no the story is incredibly rushed and have no feeling to it, all characters are paper cutouts that have even less peronality than a Wuxia martial arts novel
Combine that with 0 proof reading and the murder of the English language, it’s just a recipe for disappointment
Okay honest review here the whole idea was amazing but story it' self isn't the reason.
1: Everything is rushed, the story is developing to fast.
2: MC doesn't interact with other characters much
3: MC fucking didn't change a thing in MCU until Avengers first move. I haven't read after that.
Okay something would like to tell.
1: Make the paragraph of only about 5-7 lines and that all a try to write dialogue in different lines.
If you author has done writing this story once try writing it again and then give it to your all I will support you.
Aside from all that can only say A for effect but just write this story again for only two times as I said earlier and this story will be top MCU fanfic
I'm super pissed off; people have been easily paying for privilege chapters suddenly; the release rate goes to one chapter a day? Hey we're paying out the ass monthly and we get screwed over like this? Wtf get back to 2 chapters a day why the heck are you guys screwing us over like this?
Great novel, Really love the character development the writing is great, just the world background is lacking, but I really do love the fresh character it's great, and even amazing. Love to see more chapters.
Ok, the story has a good premise, ok background and meh characters so far, but a MAJOR problem is how the author implements the mc’s growth, he makes the mc seem useless stupid so he can learn new stuff, yes it is a good way of doing stuff but why do you have to make the mc so stupid instead of making a harder challenge. So far the mc is deemed a ‘genius’ but he’s retarded in every aspect, he doesn’t even use his past life knowledge to it’s worth. Might as well have the mc be a thinker instead. It becomes more noticeably the more the story goes on. The mc only uses the logic and equations and some random ideas from his past life. And I know the author doesn’t want to have the mc to be OP but that doesn’t mean the mc has to be retarded, you know give him less power rather than make him stupid. Oh and the grammar is terribly, he some how messes up the important words but get the filler words almost perfect... like he is trying to annoy the readers.
Welp, best of luck readers to this book.
This is actually pretty good but surprisingly so he could use a bit more character development on some of the side characters but overall a decent book
Its really a hidden gem.....Why its not getting enough reviews....more people should read this novel.....maybe because of the stability of updates is low.....since the novel is in its early stages...you need more stable updates for people to get interested in it.... Author you should really keep up the good work and do more updates.....Since the novel is really promising.
i dont exactly know how to feel, but sometimes this story actually makes me wonder what will come next, the best part seems to come after chapter 27, but I really have to go back reread the rest of the story sometimes
