You deserve a high review, for creating this mashup story into something unique to yourself and writing. Keep on grinding , keep on doing what u enjoy, and gl ><
This story is really good. Top tier. I have binge read all of it and I can't wait for more releases. You should honestly try this amazing srory
I think this a good novel to continue on. Although it may be the similar concept as unrivalled god of alchemy it’s still undeniable has potential. I want to know if the author decides to continue this story if the male lead will Be so likeable and not some jerk who have so many suitors. He can be nice to all females yet should not go over the line and create harem. Wish to know how the story end. It was a great 11 chapters and wish there is more
This novel is really great and interesting if you like these type of novels do give this a read.... Its plot is really interesting pls do check it out
It has some good promise, and it has a nice twist on the cliche of a system making the mc op. Mainly just needs to work on making the chapters updates more reliably frequent.
this book is actually really good the main character is not a human but a boss this type of book is rare and there is no system the only downsides are 1. u stopped posting2. maybe you could use -50 hp or [fireball] else the reader cant understans the fight and sorry for my bad grammar
Loving the book till now, really good writing. However, I'd like a better chapter update frequency, at least twice a week. Also I wanna know if the romantic interests of the mc will **** other people as prostituteprostitutes.
There is big issue with this novel, the MC is a psycho, who doesn't value life, everything can be done in order to gain more power like conducting experiments on innocent humans, eating human and stuff, at one point he literraly forsake his humanity for power. He's plain evil and clearly deserve to die. It would have been ok if the storytelling was not biased, but the author clearly approves the decision of the MC, implying the mc is pragmatic and right while kind hearted people who value life like daniel are soft and weak minded. I'm giving a bad grade because people reading it if careless can be brainwashed into accepting filthy and evil ideas subtely.
Unreadable.... re write the novel
Genuinely love the story not alot of pokemon stories thats not about fighting hope it nvr drops ############################################################################################################
Truthfully The writing quality is bad. Since the author is writing only as a hobby I won't be too harsh. The plot isn't good it contains a few plotholes and since writing quality is bad it's hard to sometimes make out what the author wants to say.Character description is subpar.No updates stability since the author writes when he has time. World Background - Other than a general overview it's blank I would say.And author doesn't read the comments so don't put an effort to mention typos.
Everything about this book is really cute even with the character. It’s very interesting along with being different. I hope that you keep updating!!! ???