Of you want something new, something refreshing and interesting this is the best one you can find. Of course, there are mistakes here and there but I find this novel pretty intriguing!
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Missing Harem Tag and pretty generic. wish I had read the reviews before I started reading other wise I would have passed. If you are into that kinda things this is for you.
this novel is mid asf. cliche story, the side characters doesn't have a brain. and the conversations between characters are very cringy and unhumanlike, and unnatural, i don't get how you don't see that something is strange with the conversations, i mean you're a human, right? or maybe you never talked to someone in your life? it's just straight up stupid, it's like the conversations were written by 9 yo. the conversations are so bad, it felt strange, lifeless and bland. well, i just read all the free chaps, maybe it'll get better.
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This is my review. 1- The novel is very fast from level 0 to level 3 in thirteen chapters. 2- There are no difficulties in his life learning his spell with ease, I understand the author put the tag overpowered, but this tag expresses the strength of the character in his level and not in all his life of studying love etc. .3- The magic system is frankly weak. You could have followed the magic system in the novel (A Wizard's Secret) and made it difficult to raise the level, and the protagonist's abilities is infinite magic he try testing his magic in several ways to find the best way to rise to a higher level . 4- There is no character building that makes the character feel boring There is nothing special about him such as (1) Does he love knowledge and he has nothing but knowledge in his eyes. 2- Is his personality loving or ruthless. 3- Is his personality weak and getting stronger in The future, or that his character is strong from the beginning. 4- Is he a clever or a fool, etc.) 5- The world is all usual, nothing new, i don't feel any enthusiasm for this world The tiger is the same tiger in a larger size if the author sets strange and dangerous creatures as an example of a creature It looks like a diamond, but it has an eye on every side, and when you look at it, you get crazy , the world would be interesting. 6- And this is the most important point for me. There is no big or small goal in the novel trying to become strong for the sake of becoming strong, no more or less and system are trash in general that corrupts the narrative, especially if there is a store feature in it. ......... (I hope my words are not too harsh, but that's how I felt when I read your novel)
Despite being over 500 chapters in length you get the feeling the author has barely scratched the surface of what is possible. So even though I'm making this review now I still consider this in the beginning stages. Without further ado, let's begin...WRITING QUALITY:-Overall the quality is legible meaning accurate grammar and sentence structure most of the time. How do you know that your reading is poor? One way is because of the need to read over the text you just read not because of its complexity or depth but because you didn't grasp what the author is trying to convey. You won't need to worry about this.STABILITY OF UPDATES:-The author as far as I can tell never stayed in the double digits for weekly releasing nor dropped below 4 chapters for long if at all. This is a sign showing the author's desire to stick at it for the long run compared to the amount released I find this a better gauge of stability. Basically, the author so far has not given us a reason to doubt.STORY DEVELOPMENT:-The short answer is you always find yourself coming back for more. The longer answer is the beginning you are brought to some of the highest peaks of power which shows the vast gap between where the MC is now and the progress to be made from the bottom. With his dungeon as a center point, you see the characters venture out exploring the world similar to a character in a game bringing color to grey areas. This is a deliberate decision the author has made compared to other stories that have the MCs base of operations move with him while he scales the ladder of power. Neither is inherently better just more of a preference this author shows.-Not only do you see the MC develop the story being the one we follow but also many side characters and future villains scheming in the background giving you a foreshadowing of events to come. Overall great job.CHARACTER DESIGN:-The author does a masterful job of making sure each character is fleshed out so they add to the MC and the greater plot. Everyone close to the MC has a distinct personality, side characters you meet along the way regardless of duration feel like real people, and the villains are good villains in the sense they make you root for the MC and his companions.-Many people who don't like harem have legitimate concerns that those characters will either be useless or take away from the greater plot. You don't need to worry about this because so far the author has eluded to a few potential harem members however the plot demands your full attention so romance is not the center but instead the byproduct of a compelling story you read unfold.-Another concern many readers have is stories that have harem members surrounding the MC lack other companions which works sometimes while other times it leaves the reader wanting. I would say you are given a myriad of companions helping the MC, hindering the MC, and being there to flesh out the world.WORLD BACKGROUND:-As I wrote earlier the beginning does an excellent job of showing how vast the world is and how much potential the author can use to develop the story and characters. As the story progresses the MC is shown more of the world that seems never-ending which reminds me of peeling back the layers of an onion trying to find the nonexistent core.-The background is tied in obvious and mysterious ways to the MC letting you make your own judgments while giving you more bit by bit proving how much and little you really know so far.Overall I can't recommend this novel enough. Give it try if you're looking for quality content.
One of the best ongoing novel for me....210 chapter in raw................................................................................................
I like it. That is all I have to say. Because I haven't finished it reading, I never knew of the character development since I didnt stay long. But I love the setting.
I have read this story upto CH 680. So I probably have a good idea about the story. Next, their might be SPOILERS. Lots of them. So you are warned. I will try to be general and vague, but no promise.
I am dividing the review into multiple sections which each section focusing on major points or issues.
CLICHES : Let's just accept that their is no running from clichés. Authors have probably tried all different ways a story can go leaving us with numerous repetitions and iterations of the same thing. Fortunately ,this story has clichés, but author has done his best to not make it a copy-paste of some random CN Novel. And honestly, it's time we stop crying over clichés and just accept it as a major part of Chinese literature. And yes, that was an underhandedly insult.
Cultivation : It isn't exactly unique, but it does have few places where it shines. And we can't expect him to come with some new method of cultivation and magic. Not everyone is Brandon Sanderson. ( And his methods are weird but awesome ). The cultivation techniques are mixed and heavily inspired from many famous novels. I won't name them but all CN Novel veterans will probably realise quickly. During the early part of the novel, that's about until Ch 400(?) his cultivation technique was a major subplot. Even in later chapters it is and will play a part. His technique gives him Monster QI, which automatically makes him the enemy of Human kind.
Techniques : Overly top names with special effects. What else to say?
World : Just like most cultivation world's. Noob Village go Noob town to Noob City to Player 10-25 Village to Player 10-25 town and so on. Basically, the usual. It has its bright spots but mostly the same. Although Monster World and Ascending World's are still an enigma.
MC : He's okay. No Rape Guy. No Cruel MC. Not an MC who loves to destroy sects just for fun. Hardworking. Mostly calm. So no Lin Ming, Chu Yan or anything. It's probably not an harem despite numerous girls having an interest in him. He just wants to find his teacher.
OP Cheats? : Yes. But it's given by his teacher and not something belonging to him. They are basically top level treasures of that world. She stole them...she highhandedly took them and gave it to the MC. His Heaven Root? Belongs to the Phoenix god. His mind power stuff? It's an Buddhist seed. The technique? It's some supreme technique.
Enemies : You have both intelligent as well as run of the mill enemies. Don't expect intelligent MCs at the level of TTNH or any novel by that author.
I should have basically covered everything? Any doubts? Post it below.
Sorry for any mistakes. Some are mine others are mostly my mobile hanging up on me.
A hillaruos way to die and reincarnate, just how the **** did MC managed to stay sane, when his thing in the nether region got replaced by... a women's thing.
Story is interesting can be read, but locking the chapters this ahead of time, it's not cool boi!
Roach doesn't normally give reviews but roach just loves this shameless mc too much. My only complaint is the grammar, same repeated mistakes like "durning" when it should be "during" and a few others. But otherwise very entertaining!