I am writing this review, while being on chapter 11. The book started slow but when it took off, it took off ! The twists are very good and it's always very exiting to read. I am often on the verge of my chair when reading the story. I also liked the touch of humour here and there (XD chapter 11). Keep writing !Ding ! New review added
This novel has a good mix of system and action. I gotta say I'm impressed! This kind of writing was scarce as many system novels flooded this site. A cut above the rest to be exact! Nice job of portraying the characters and absolutely one of the best so far that I have read. Good execution of the genre! Kudos and good luck in the future!
i don't do reviews often, but figured i should because somehow this novel has high ratings. i'll start off with the writing quality, it's poor. the english isn't good, the writing feels robotic and detached, it's not immersive at all and is sometimes confusing due to the poor english. idk about the stability of updates so i just put that at 5 stars. story development is weird, doesn't make sense, there's tons of plot holes and it feels like the author completely forgets everything he wrote about 3 chapters ago, it's like the men in black wiped his memory every 3 chapters. as for character design, it's really awkward, pretty stupid especially the "protagonists" who aren't really protagonists, they're just normal stupid villains called the protagonist while the mc is a slave to the system and an idiot, other characters also feel detached and not real. as for the world background, i haven't read enough to really have a good opinion about it, but so far it's nothing special, and is not that great.
Thus is one if the best and most original novels on here! This isn't just some power fantasy that most novels on here quickly become and as of yet has no romance other than mentions of his past life and is likely to stay that way. Beware those who are opposed to witnessing humans at their worst and willing to do anything to survive for the Main characters second incarnation as a human shows him and most others of our race at such a point. However while the MC may seem cruel it is only him doing absolutely everything in the name of survival and finding a way to survive... Or die for the last, final, time!
Long time ago,there was a gray magic castle in the monster town.One day,the old brother Monkey and the young brother mankey were going to the gray magic castle ,they wanted to know what was in the castle.At morning,they met at star park and they had a lot of things to take.They had a big baseball bat to take,because if some bad people fight them they can use that to hit them.They had a camera to take some pictures for the castle.They had a torch to see in the dark and they bring some water and food.After twenty minutes,they were in front of the castle.They wanted to go to the castle at night so nobody will find them.At ten o’clock,they went to the castle,but they saw there were a lot of robbers in the castle,so they had to wait and wait.
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It's better than the average trial read novel by a lot. The world is interesting, the writing quality is good. Feels so weird to have a good novel in trial read. This category has been plagued by brain-dead stories and tropes and the first 20 chapters of this one looks good. I hope this keeps going and this review doesn't end up looking trollish.
So yeah I'm not gonna go into details because someone else already did but I just wanna say that you should really read this book if you're looking for a real sect development story with little to no cliche and above all a slow and steady story instead of a fast paced one where mc becomes op just in 2 chapters. yeah so that was a little long but who cares. continue like this author you're doing a great job.
I am up to the latest non-priv chapter, so here we go:
Writing Quality: First of all English isn't my first language so this is from my point of view. There are some minor mistakes from time to time that the author fixes as soon as they are pointed out so I don't have problems in that department.
Stability of Updates: 2 chapters per day is 5 stars as well. Nothing more to say here.
Story Development: So far I like the where the story is heading, there are some twists and turns. I like what happened in the latest chapters (Don't want to spoil anything in the review so I will leave it here).
Character Design: There is development in MC's character from the earlier chapters which is satisfactory for me, and from what I am seeing in the latest chapters he will evolve even more. There isn't a lot of focus on FLs in the early chapters so I think we will see more progress with them and side characters in the future.
World Background: That's the only thing that is lacking in my opinion. All of the descriptions of empires, capital ciites and so on are kinda hollow for me, there could be more details later on to make the immersion greater. I will still rate it 5 stars so the review stays at 5 stars but the story is good enough to have overall 5 star rating.
Quite boring, the MC encounters deadly situations almost all the time, it's too much to the point of becoming very boring, the only slightly eye catching thing is the novelty of the mc's ability and the fact that he can become a monster, other than that, the main plot, the characters, the world background, and so on are just mediocre. I'm also disatisfied with mc's personality, sometimes he's quite slow to adapt, he was amazed at simple and predictable things. I also have a feeling that things will be quite repititive. Personally, it's not really worth reading. But maybe it's personal taste and other people like it.
Wow This is amazing I I’m so glad that I found i don't understand how this is not popular yet.