After reviewing my work I'm trying to be better but unfortunately I will probably will stop writing because of my exams and how IRL treat me this days my work is still on prologue state
The story starts out with intense building as you read. The character design is good so far. Love the use of "mana" magic! Looking forward to more. Keep it up!
The first chapter of Working On You: My Uncompleted Mission immediately draws readers into a world of class divides, duty, and mystery. Emeris Rose masterfully introduces Mai, a humble commoner whose life takes an unexpected turn when she is summoned to the royal palace. The chapter is filled with intrigue, setting up Mai’s journey with a mix of curiosity and tension.The writing is vivid, making readers feel the weight of Mai’s fate. Questions arise—why was she chosen? How will she handle the arrogant Prince Lilian? The chapter sets the perfect stage for a gripping transformation story.With smooth storytelling and a compelling premise, promises an engagingread, making readers eager to follow Mai’s journey. A strong start to what feels like an unforgettable novel!
Am obsessed with this book. love the plots and characters. I love Kael and Amelia's invisible bond, love their teasing, 'Little flame' gives me butterflies. looking forward to read more of this fabulous work.
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this is a good read. rather confused at first but it was nice to know before the chapter ended. The continuation is good and it is clear. recom..
It has every element I love in a book or movie, it's exciting and easy to read I truly enjoyed reading it ??u200d♀️?
Tbh, I've only read until chapter 22 because the MC is bad and waiting for character development for 39 chapters isn't worth the read. Author could've made the character development in a much shorter time frame than having to wait almost 40 chaps, I GUARANTEE that most of your readers have dropped the story because of how long the character development is.The writing quality is amazing since you can really understand the story well and the Grammer mistakes are next to none. The story can be slow at some points but it fleshes out the side characters well.All in all the story is great I love it but the MC is really off putting and some readers can't handle that, including me. If you can handle waiting for a character development then try this story out, it's good. If you can't then don't waste your time reading this.
This book is such a wild ride! Ovelia’s journey from a mistreated outcast to stepping into the dangerous, magical world of werewolves had me hooked. The twist with her being chosen as the Alpha King’s mate? Total game-changer. If you’re into drama, dark secrets, and a bit of romance, you’ll love this one!
It’s good, give it a try.
is this a second chance novel? Looking forward to more chapters!