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I now understand why this book is familiar haha. I'm already reading the filipino version
I’m not sure why others said this is well written. It could have been a good read but it needs to be edited (unless you think it’s normal to say crying your kids out…that’s just one example)
great story
Keep writing, ate!?
I can never get enough of this book. good job author more ink to your pen keep updating
please update
Please have this book proofread/edited by someone whose native language is English. This book has a lot of errors: wrong use of pronouns and genders; repetition; punctuations used incorrectly; incomplete sentences; and mixing first and third person. Also, some transitions were not seamless.
This novel is great! It doesn't have too much drama, and the couple is intelligent and respectful towards each other. There's a comment suggesting that the male lead didn't respect the female lead and got her pregnant, but I don't see it that way. It seems more like he wanted to have a child with her, to create something that belongs to both of them. Give it a try, and consider the era and context before being too critical.
The translation is quite accurate, and the story fits well within its genre. It's an entertaining read, although some readers might need to suspend disbelief for a more enjoyable experience. The protagonist is a fake saintess, with the real one due to appear in five years. She plans to escape before the main male lead (ML) realizes she's not genuine, fearing her demise. However, the divine entities, who communicate via a chat interface, have different plans.
This tale unfolds as a reverse harem, with three potential MLs, potentially four based on the novel cover, featuring a prince, a high priest, a cunning merchant, and possibly a fourth character with white hair. The high priest, a blond and stoic figure, is the main ML for now, as they share living quarters at the temple. Their relationship is intriguing, as he becomes increasingly obsessed with the protagonist as she gains divine powers. Initially, he had intentions to abduct her, but a bet leads to a humorous situation involving a magical leash and collar.
The crown prince, a red-haired hothead, has limited screen time, and his sudden shift from hatred to affection feels rushed. The dark-haired merchant, a sweet mystery, may be the intended endgame, but his lack of development and rushed relationship with the protagonist feel forced.
While I personally lean towards the high priest, the author seems to favor the merchant. With four characters on the cover, a fourth white-haired ML, likely the demon lord, could be introduced later in the story, as he's briefly mentioned but hasn't appeared yet until chapter 50.
Overall, the story keeps me engaged, and the divine interference adds a comedic touch. It'll be interesting to see how these relationships evolve and whether the author's chosen ML is the one that prevails.
Once upon a time, in a distant African savannah, resided a gentle and innocent baby giraffe, whose naivety was endearing, and a clever and charismatic antelope, who held a strong appeal... Wait, what? Oh, this is how the author introduces our main love interest (ML) and protagonist (MC). The narrative is filled with warmth, sweetness, and plenty of laughter, particularly when their affectionate interaction unfolds, with Fei Fei playfully scolding his little giraffe, which brings smiles to readers' faces. Despite his towering size, the MC's heart remains childlike and an ardent fangirl (or fanboy) of ML. Fortunately, their feelings are reciprocated, with Chen Yue being a devoted partner, always looking out for Fei Fei's well-being.
This tale has a sugar rush factor, leaving readers with a delightful sensation. However, one minor issue is that:
SPOILER ALERT: The story is quite short, and there's a brief description of their relationship development, which some might find lacking.
Nonetheless, overall, the enjoyable story more than makes up for its length.
Are there only 7 great realms in this novel or is it just the mortal worlds realms and there are more after?