interesting Book its nice sanbox themed read
Ending terrible, enjoyed the novel until the last chapter.
Not much character development or structure. I very rarely drop web novels that I start, but I can't force myself to continue this story. The MC lacks depth (which is easy to impart in a reincarnation genre), and all the character act like kids without common sense.
hi there, kinda shameless for an author to review their own book(nervously laughs). Well, I shamelessly gave myself all stars on world background and character design. This is because while I struggle in a lot of areas in writing (fight scenes) pppsch who said that?
I try to make my characters not only the MC but also the side characters seem as wholesome as possible, to have a personality that people can actually remember them even 50 chapters later and I hope I did that with this book.
The cases featured in this novel some will be cultivation tropes and others will be a little unique.
Also just as a heads-up the novel also features multiple POVs..It's hard to just sit in the courtroom when there's a whole world out there. Who knows what might be cooking? Anyhow, I hope you enjoy the novel as much as i enjoy writing it and potentially get Yang Qing in trouble.
the story is better than most of the top 20 novels here the MC is smart and thinks before doing anything different from most novel MC's if the updates were faster it would be in the top 10
You'll understand after reading a few chapters, especially the last few... I don't know how it was achieved but this novel with a good potential was ruined by the horrible editing.
at chapter 4 you can drop this fanfic right away.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Hello guys
If you like game like system, unique mc and world background discover little by little you are in the good place.
I will upload chapter when i want but a minimum of 5 per week.
Hope you enjoy fellow daoist.
An interesting take on a game world and its mechanics. The 'balanced fortunes' system (for lack of a better name) that the world has is a surprising new take on how a game may be designed, at least in my reading/playing experience. A smidge concerned about the state of the MC and his life, both past and rebirth, but that is hopefully just due to a lack of current exposition detailing it at this stage of the writing. Overall this novel has gotten me intrigued and I am looking forward to watching as it grows.
190 + chapters and an amazingly committed author. A well-written story so far.
10 Chapter in and I'm invested. I think the story is well planned and I like how it progresses. The earlier chapter's pacing is not bad but I do like a faster pace overall I enjoy it.
Amazing more updates more more updates
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