Shitttttt is it finally back after 4+ years
Hello everyone, this is the author first of all giving herself five star because why not?So, I have had a lot of complaints about errors in the book. Gramatic and spelling errors to be more specific and I have decided to do something about it.I'll be edited the book chapter by chapter for spelling and errors in the grammar and the app I'll be using is "prowrittingaid"That also means that I won't be uploading any new Chapters for a while Thanks for reading this book up till now, I hope you can wait till I'm done with editing and not just trash it cause I'm not uploading new Chapters. Until I'm done editing, have a wonderful time. Love ya all?
Aaarrrgghhhhh...... This Princess think she can get the third.... But unexpectedly someone is faster than This Princess.... Anyway, as The Fourth One, This Princess also offer All Big Five Stars for you~Keep on writing, Author-san~!!!
it's really promising.. please published
It’s a little too earlier to say very much. I don’t write Sci-Fi so it’s hard for me to understand the finer points but I think maybe a few more details can help. I did not expect humans to be wiped out like that, but that’s the direction the author is going, so it’s different then what I imagined. If you are a sci-fi reader you may want to give it a read. I’d like to see what the author plans to do now.
A decent novel, while I have a few complaints mentioned in comments, keep in mind people rarely comment on their compliments.
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I think it will take very little time for this novel to receive the recognition it deserves...........................................................
After reading this poorly written thing, I am mad. I mean this is a copy of the legendary mechanic plot. It is very bad quality, the power system is a carbon copy of the legendary mechanic. Test subject zero, an organization that plans to overthrow the current nations. The only changes are names and monsters coming from the game after two years. The characters are copies, the world-building and plotline is a super poor copy. Even the sypnosis and chapter arent the same.
Great at least for now. The writing could improve, but it's not too bad. The big problems come from the way the author handles the speech and the quotations marks that go with it. In terms of character design and world background, these are temporary scores which are bound to change later.
I’m caught up with Translations. It’s a decent MMORPG novel. What my issue with this novel is that we don’t know anything from MC past, why he died. I read a Review saying something about a Tattoo but never explained in the 60 chapters I’ve read. But we just know he’s a ‘expert’It’s freaking slow and with the pace of the story, we’ll get mostly long time skips since plot won’t happen for a two years! (The novel gives long explanations for every chapter you could imagine how long this will take..)So far I like the MC. I see a lot of potential with characters/cast. At first I was going to berate this novel. But the warm-hearted moment and characters made me change my mind. This can be a good novel if characters with a bit a filler was added more. But again the pace is a problem.All in all to soon to judge properly. Romance:? No girl is explained but I hope to God it isn’t the girl who betrayed him in the first chapter. Idc how many excuses you give her. How about the girl neighbor or adorablecat? “The World Online” CN traumatized me in a way. I don’t want a rich perfect goddess out no where.
Refreshing story about game.. story development look good and not so fast or slow... The main character is cool but sometimes his moral is low.. and background story is so good to much job choice