dreamy_charcoal
the only bad side of this story is bad grammer but it's manageable, and low amount of characters interaction side character's gives the feeling of an npc.thnx
It has an interesting premise but shallow characters, hurried scenes and a really subpar writing.Had to drop it for now, might pick it up again in the future if it gets edited and maybe a bit revised.
Just read it , its a great novel ..................................................................................................................................
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A truly amazing story that makes you think. I love the clever insight the author uses, I can’ wait to read more of it! I won’t give any spoilers, but I highly recommend reading it!
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I may be lenient on my review but I truly appreciate the creativity the author had put into this novel overall along with the in-depth descriptions. Although I haven't read many novels, I know a unique story when I see one and this is definitely one of them.Loving the chapters! Keep it up!
THANKS AUTHOR FOR THIS GREAT NOVEL ......... well that's it and i love this novel by~~
This novel is excellent and has potential. The world in this novel is ruled by women and the Mc isekai here. I wonder if he will be princess carried too. I'd love to see that. I also can't wait until the magic is shown, and perhaps the Mc can take down a dragon.
