Elijah_Martin_9780
The world building and the characers are really good. Also, the writing is spectacular, too. The way of narrating is very engulfing, so much so that I find myself completely focused on the story very often. Try it, it's really good.
Was Nice in tHe first few chapters but it started Going downhill after Business Came in and the exessive viagra pills. There is also unclear world develpment and annoying opposing business groups. also why is the mc such such childish at some occasions!!!! Wasnt He a graNdpa with wisdom
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Translation becomes really bad until it doesnt make sense
Although the story makes our protagonist miserable, it is because of his aura as you know that the protagonist will has a miserable life before he can get happiness in the end so i think i'm gonna wait for the next chapter....
This novel is only good to pass the time the MC is crap story development is crap and he followed by misfortune everywhere he goes and cause those around him to die this is a continuous cycle
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I luv this sooooooooooooooooooooo much! I hope B find luv soon TTThe detail good I like. Sorry 4 bad english. Author upload 2-3 chps daily plsss. Wait get tired, I ook foward 2 next chapter ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
This novel made me redownload Total War: Attila. The author seems to do plenty of research and put plenty of thought into his novels to make sure that you get the right balance of believable alternate history and thrilling story progression.
free 5 star review just to ask: Anyone know any good basketball novels that are pretty long and i can binge read in a few days minimum? Preferably ones with good grammar lol. I'd prefer if there was romance/system tag in it as well, there doesn't have to be though.
I love the novel and how the story is going. Were by everyone is trying to survive after the apocalypse. Still waiting what will happen at the end if the apocalypse will end or if they will find the cure of the virus, thank you author keep it up.
ch-515I'll just write my complain because everything else about this novel is perfect and unique .There is no Romance . To me it feels like there are no real feelings b/w MC and his harem . It feels like Each and every girl is with him b/c of resources and safety he can provide them to make them powerful and he is keeping them b/c of their beauty. There is no real feelings involved . It feels more like arranged relationship than love relationship. MC seems more like some rich young master spending resources on girls and using their body in return . It may be because of lack of interaction between MC and his girls . There is practically no interaction or relationship building between them . The whole interaction between MC and some girls is defined in one paragraph .The way this story is building it seems to be a long novel , so it wont hurt if author spends some chapters on relationship building .AND more importantly the girls which truly care about MC(Su mei , Quing Quimu) are not in his harem at this point , I hope they will be in future .Well leaving Romance aside , this novel is the best novel i have read till date . Hoping for faster updates .
