I really like calculative male leads. So this took the cake for me.
I really enjoyed the unique setting and the virus system...it was kinda fun to read. I would recommend it to whoever likes these settings..
Writing Quality: There are some minor mistakes but the real problem I have is that the writing isn't really smooth, I can't just feel the story when I read it, the quality is average
Story development: So, the mc is not really mature, which I prefer, but he is still a child so it is acceptable. There are a few things I really don't like, first the stuff with his mother and her family, that was just wierd and you should change the story because it doesn't make sense. Second is the trust with his teacher, nobody should trust each other so easily, I mean yes the teacher knows his secret, but we don't know why she is helping him, is it because she is special herself? And that she just trusted him so fast don't make sense.
Character design: He is immature, childish and a bit stupid, I hope he will get soon mature and the bearing of a true king and get stronger soon. I don't really like stupid characters, and his lying skills are so bad, and that nobody can tell that he is lying with his cultivation techniqe is really sad and should be changed.
Update stability: 8 chapters a week is really good, I can't complain with that, 5 stars for that.
World background: We only know that the universe is really big and we can't comprehend how big it truly is, we know that his planet is nothing but a small planet which is really weak. Hope to get more informations for that, but it is still just the sart of the story.
Overall: The story has potential, but the problems which I explained, is the reason I will drop this novel, I just don't like the writing style, I can't bring myself to read it or pay for the chapters. I would recommend you to give it a try if you want, the first 40 chapters are free.
I rather enjoy the pace at which this story takes place, as it is at the time of writing this review. It gave me enough info of the setting and characters to be intrigued in a succinct fashion, character descriptions and the general language used is creative and entertaining, and the scenario posed in this story is thrilling and totally unique to me. I fully intend to keep reading as updates continue.
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Wow... I don't know why, but I'm really starting to like first person perspective stories. Maybe it's just the way you write, because the flow of your story is so good, I'm even starting to wonder how you do it. Like, I was easily able to pave my way through three chapters without getting distracted! Good job author[img=recommend]
Una buena novela, muy interesante.
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G'day mates!
The idea of your loved ones going missing randomly, never to be seen again... would be quite sorrowful. But what if you later found out that it wasn't due to them wandering off and getting lost in the woods, but instead... they were kidnapped and sold to a mech army in the future.
I am very excited to see where this goes in the future, definitely worth reading and adding to collections!
i gave 5 star based on his other novel an i will start reading this one wene it gets to 50 i love your novels keep doing what you are doing
I don't know what to say, but I'm sure of one thing, the story feels amazingly forced to the point where the mc is literally telling the exact dialogues he had in a conversation with someone to a third person. The abilities are also explained in a similar fashion. So, no thanks I just can't bear it, if other people can bear it, they might appreciate the mystery maybe, though those mysteries also feel forced.
I'm so hooked, I like how the story had been progressing. Though it's a slow paced story it is easy to understand and follow. Looking forward to more chapters more character development.??
The quality and pacing of story is really good..i dont mind reading 1000 more chapters without break if the story is just as smooth like this as it is now. Only time i feel like this when i am reading Fate destroying Emperor.
as of chapter 12 I can say that the characters feel incredibly vivid and realistic, the dialogue doesn't feel awkward and the world building is certainly there with purpose. however the grammar is utterly awful, author does take steps to fix it, however I feel he/she over-relies on the readers to point it out(I fear that when I get to the locked chapters, it's just gonna be a literary mess). when it does get to locked chapters I guarantee a lot of people will pull out, cuz the chapters are like a swipe long and continues to be until like ch 80, author did say that he Increases the word count later, but he did it far too late. could be one of the greats if only it had:1. better grammar2.longer chapters