On thing that I can say about this story is great that even though may look cliche and stuff but the author make it so original. I recommend this to anyone looking for a good bl.
this novel is a hidden gem.Firstly, I feel the sense of character and personality of the Mc and Even side characters are well throughout, and each behave and converse in the way one would expect them to considering their circumstances and status.And for the Second point, Although there weren't many chapter so far, the pacing and content is done very well and does leave you expecting more withought giving the sense of boredom.The novel does not feel rushed and the story moves forward in a steady but enjoyable pace.the writing quality is top-notch, with no grammar errors.love reading this novel so far.
Wow just Wow, this is really great the pase might be a bit fast but that's personal opinion. Does anyone have any similar Noel's about Hinduism that tells the story of 1 person +1 if that person is op
This is not bad at all for new readers....
But if you had been reading chinese novels for few years you'll find the writing annoying like...
1.) "One had to know that blah blah blah.."
2.) "If others would know about this they will die at blah blah.."
3.)"MC clicked his tongue at annoyance.... MC clicked his tongue and rejoice..."
4.) "The blah blah as if blah blah."
5.) "She's so pretty, she has a cold demeanor, glinting eyes, pretty eyebrows, sexy curves, pouty lips, a unique acne.... blah blah" It's funny how female characters always are described so detailedly while the MC's description is just... a transmigrator who failed 4 times nd were granted a cheat just because...
I go 6 chapters and I already saw too many cliches, the protagonist from chapter 1 thinks he is special because he is a transmigrant and he thinks that he can only have strange things and the others do not. The idea of merging with pets as armor seemed interesting to me but the protagonist is so boring and the story has so many cliches that I prefer to abandon it and wait for someone who creates a better version, because these stories always come out 1 or 2.
A gem of a novel indeed,made me hooked from the start and didn't make me uninterested.
1. Writing quality: Better than most orginals, I have not discovered any mistakes.
2. Story development: Top level, I felt sad for the people living in that world, especially the Mc, I could kind of relate to him.....
not being able to anything, if some random cultivator kills your family is very unfair and almost sickening!
3. Character design superb
So those Mc harem has traps? If it those would the mc let the traps bang with his women?
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All i can say after reading less than a hundred chaps:
> great action/fighting
> I thought its bro m but its not
> giants are OP
> Wondering what's the capacity of MC's eye to store more people XD
A not-so shameless author review here!
Let's go straight to the point, first of all, the book is filled with info dumps, that much I can say but the premium chaps have so much lesser than the free ones, you can say that it's some kind of growth in my part as an author.
Second, I made a huge blunder of including 20+ chaps of backstory on the main storyline, I know, it ruined the reader's immersive experience with the MC in the story, and I am truly apologetic for that as I indeed regret doing such a thing, if only I could go back in time then I would've uploaded them on a separate volume instead, what a pity!
Third, as of now, I am still working to the best of my abilities to improve myself as an author and I think you would be able to see these improvements if you read on? Not entirely sure though, hehe.
Finally, the author is super lazy and often procrastinates in socmed to relieve boredom and avoid their writing responsibilities, so if you happen to have socmeds as well, why not motivate(scold) me there by dm'ing one of my accounts?
That's all, take care and happy reading!
Love the characters and their interaction... begging author to release more... pure fluff
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To bad for me, i cant recomended this low tier novel
To bad for me, i cant recomended this low tier novel
To bad for me, i cant recomended this low tier novel
To bad for me, i cant recomended this low tier novel
To bad for me, i cant recomended this low tier novel
To bad for me, i cant recomended this low tier novel
To bad for me, i cant recomended this low tier novel
To bad for me, i cant recomended this low tier novel
To bad for me, i cant recomended this low tier novel
This needs to get picked.
Flaws:
-Poor worldbuilding
-The cultivation realms have not been explained yet (CH 19)
-Story is shallow
-Slightly wonky translations, still very understandable though. I’ve read far worse, this is very much tolerable.
Merits:
-Fun read.
-Better than most of the stuff that gets picked nowadays.
-Decently conceptualised system.
Overally I’d give this a 3/5 it I’m giving it a 5 cuz I want it to get picked.